Reviews for Ryou in Wonderland
Guest chapter 23 . 4/9
Thank you for the thrilling chapter, especially the dark cliffhanger. Let’s see who come around to help Ryou out. Hope you have a nice day and stay safe.
The Queen of Plot Twists chapter 23 . 4/9
GAHHH! how could you end it there! Girl you know how to make an exit let me tell you! Man i was hugging poor Ryou and helping him through his depression and soon as Yugi showed up and he finally told himself it was okay to move on and i was crying and then THOSE assholes show up!
UGH! man! this update made me so happy! being stuck at home sucks and this just made my whole day so thank you for that!
Oh man well Yugi escaped so if Yami and Bakura don't come charging in next chapter i will be so dissappointed...seriously i can just picture Bakura charging in on a scythes and scarring the ever loving shit out of those baffons but letting them live becaue he knows ryou probably wouldn't like anyon being killes because of him no mtter how wretched but you've done nothing but srprise me in the past so we'll see! this story is so awesome! i love it! and i love rereading it!
Not Signed In chapter 22 . 3/2
Good for you, Bakura! Go get your man back! X)

And oh, poor lonely Ryou. I hope the first thing that happens is one of the others gives him a hug.
Guest chapter 22 . 3/2
Thank you for the tragic chapter, where all the players recognize what they lost when it was too late... or is it? Hope you have a nice day.
The Queen of Plot Twists chapter 22 . 3/2
Oh my God you have no idea how happy this made me! I had a gut feeling and there it was and oh man i was SO happy to see Bakura again...man you can really tell the affect Ryou had/has on him. especially when he said if he wanted royu's heart he couldn't steal it like crawford tried too...he's still that grouchy, sharp-tongued Bakura we all know and love but he's actually controlling his temper better and you can tell the way he addresses Joey and Seto, and when yugi gave him Amane's necklace i almost died!
His reaction was perfect-that simple little gesture was all the proof he needed to know Ryou loves him back! i'm so excited to see what he' scheming and i DIED at the mad as march hare comment (I remember loving that as akid and loving it even more when i found out what it actually MEANT! XD)
Poor Ryou, though, i had a feeling this would happen and now the poor baby thinks he's lost everything but again i love the twist of it-you gotta lose everything to truly realize what you have.
thsi was a wonderful chapter! everytime you update it just makes my heart jump! I cant wait for the next chapter but until then i'm gonna be enjoying this one cause Bakura is just way too much when he's in love!
Guest chapter 21 . 2/8
Your description of Ryou's travel was really beautiful!
It's so sad seeing him leave Wonderland. Such a short time and he' made so many friends! Really nice bittersweet chapter.
Guest chapter 21 . 2/1
Thank you for the somber chapter. Hope you have a nice day.
The Queen of Plot Twists chapter 21 . 2/1
WAH! oh that made me want to cry! also welcome back! I'm amazed you got this done despite the computer problems and thanks so much for updating! this made my whole night :)
I loved the ride through the sky and Ryou admiring wonderland-poor baby you can tell he's torn, he really wants to stay but he truly believes he HAS to go back ans he wants desperately to believe this is real but he cant trust himself to believe it...and i almost died when he asked yugi to give Bakura his locket...his SISTER'S locket! WAH! if THAT doesn't send Bakura on the first portal jump to the real world to find Ryou i don't know what will...man i'm excited because i have no idea what will happen next and i'm all the more excited because of it! this was a fantastic chapter! wonderful work as always!
Guest chapter 20 . 9/20/2019
Thank you for the amazing chapter. Hope you have a nice day.
The Queen of Plot Twists chapter 20 . 9/20/2019
You have no idea how happy this update made me! I love this story and I loved the DRAGONfky! She was amazing! I was half hoping Bakura would go with thin but if I know him it’s not the kastvwe’ll See if our beloved shirt tempered king of hearts! I love this story! Oh Ryou please don’t leave I’d you do you might not get a chance to come back to wonderland!
Guest chapter 4 . 7/10/2019
You have such a great imagination! It goes so well with this story and wonderland. The characters are very nice so far.
Guest chapter 19 . 3/31/2019
Thank you for the lovely chapter. Hope you have a nice day.
The Queen of Plot Twists chapter 19 . 3/31/2019
Woohoo! I was so happy to see a. Den chaoter! As a bookworm and library but (and hoping to become a librarian myself) I LOVED the kinraryband thatbthe bokks are somewhat alive! That's so cool! The way you imagine wonderland is magnificent and I love Shizuoka web the head librarian!
The portrait of the queen's was cool too...I didn't fail to notice how Ryou was comparing himself to her and the thought of being Queen actually crossed his mind-oh Ryou those arent nerves their doubts!
I was kinda hoping the portal Shizuka found would take a few weeks or so to open but I guess once all is said and done and Ryou is actually faced with the opportunity to go home and leave wonderland-that's whwen It'll become clear he's happier in wonderland than he was in the real world and what's he actually going back to-or lack there of.

It's also obvious Bakura is talking for him in his own way that's stilknin character for Bakura which I also love! I'm so excited to see what happens next and what Ryou will decided to do!
The Queen of Plot Twists chapter 18 . 1/10/2019
oh my gosh this made me so appy!
Rabbit peggy is a coward and i freaking we tNUTS when bakura pulled out those knives and said the classic line: off with his head!
of course ryou stopped him! lol God i freaking love how these two interact! Ryou is fearless when it comes to Bakura and i love how his protests work. and i love how even though ts clear bakur loves ryou he's still in character! i swear so kany tender stories lack good characterization of these two and its tragic!
the return of th talking glowers was awesome too and i love how we see this is the queen's garden-sounds like baura and ryou have something else in common-they lost their mothers young, and its heartbreaking seeing bakura falling harder and harder for Ryou and ryou in his on way is starting to acknowledge hus attraction but he's determined to do whats best for ryou even though it breaks his heart.
Regret you can still change your mind...
this is such a wonderful story: the cast, the world the depth i just cant get enough of it! this is without a doubt the best wonderland story i've ever read!
The Queen of Plot Twists chapter 17 . 12/13/2018
girl! you have no idea how much i needed that update! and in true wonderland fashion i did not expect ANY of ti! again your world building is spectacular! i loved how Crawford's kinfgdom was all underground rabbit tunnels and how Ryou was able to convince him to host masquerade as opposed to a dinner party.
the tact of wnderland is awesome!
of course baukura is FURIOUS but i love how he ran in all knight-like to save Ryou-and nded up knocing them both down the rabbit hole again.
I also love how Ryou felt relief wash over him when he was back and of course jumped down after bakura.
This story is straiht out of lewis Carroll and i love it! of all the wonderland stories ive read this is my favprite! its just like wonderland but with its own twists and turns and its so great! i love reading it!
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