Very good chapter, glad to see Qrow here,i can't wait to see next chapters and the formation of team RWBY (or whath ever you have in mind)but i advice to drop the argument beetween Weiss and Ruby,is mostly the same thing in all fics. Keep up the good work and see you soon

This was really good!

The 'left, right, left' repetition was good- and punctuating the punches with Yang's feelings was particularly effective. And it's definitely in character for Yang.

There's a few typos and some places where maybe a proper noun rather than a pronoun might have worked better (though I still knew what you meant, so maybe not), but Yang's feelings hit home and that last line is powerful (and it's not really explored in the show).

I look forward to more!

An interesting start

èretty good, as much brief. Good work.

Mhh, this could be interesting, depending of how much Ruby is old and whath are your plans.I slightly hope Qrow will be her father(i love Hummingbird), keep up the good work and see you later.

Please continue! I’d like to see where this goes!
There are a few grammatical mistakes but it’s all good. Update soon!