I like the first one it feels like it have alot of room to work with. I have never really been a fan of percy being a god but I would like to see were it goes.

I like both stories a lot. What can I say? Percy centric alternate-ish fictions is my weak point (of course there has to be power, not that real life stuff).

I would prefer harem mostly because I don't really like Percabeth that isn't from Riordan's hands, but also because I usually think "I want Percy to be with them too!" in single pairing fics most of the time for some reason.

The story based is well-written but you can do a harem or a One Ship but doing Percabeth is kind of Overrated nowadays as there are A TON of it. So some such as me do prefer rarer type of ship. Or if u just want to do it with not pairing is also good without making any corny lines and clićhe Percabeth in the ur new story. Good luck and hope u read this review/comment.

I really like the concept of both, though I'm leaning toward the second one a bit more as it progesses.

Capitalize names

First word in quotes gets capitalized.

When write a phrase like ‘She _,“_.”’ the verb used has to relate to speaking.

I feel like at the time you wrote this, English wasn't exactly your Forte. Or maybe you just don't give a damn about grammar? Anyway, It's too bad because this is a really good fix, but there are spelling errors aplenty, you forget to put letters in capital most of the time etc... It's not that bad it just makes reading the story kind off uncomfortable at times. Maybe once you finish the sequel you can come back to this one and polish it.

You know when fanfictions start to focus on nico it usually goes to shit. hopefully it won't happen here

For some reason, I think Hestia is Switzerland...Anyways, great story!

mind putting a completed tag on this one?

I was wondering if U were going to mention against the gods great novel and I love this series too

Against the god? As in the one with Yun Che cuz this is pretty similar if you've heard of it

All the cultivation cliche mabey it gets but at the begigining isn’t anything redeeming it’s just trash

Now im getting some berserk vibes.

Im getting a lot of highschool dxd vibes, which is a good thing since its like my favourite anime.