Love it!

Where the fuck is the rest of it u cunt I'm really angry and frustrated because of that you faggot

This is an amazing story and I want to read the rest of it but I can’t find your account on wattpad! If you could tell me the name of the sorry on wattpad that would be amazing!

Omg this was so good! Dont dout yourself! Keep up the good work!

Okay, first thing's first, you have a good storyline. This could go places.
Secondly, your writing style is good! Yeah, it could use a little improvement, but hey. So can everybody else's.
One thing, tho: It's Lotor, not Lottor.
Also, when you have dialogue, you need to switch to a new line.
For example:
(...Allura was the nurse of the college. They walked into the room.
"Allura, we need help," Pidge said.)
Make sense?
And finally, watch your punctuation and spelling. There are a few places where there's a space between the quotation marks and the words, and there are some periods where there should be commas. Like here:
("You know the drill," she said, going to get the supplies she needed...)
And careful with your capital letters!
(Didn't Lance tell you to stop, Lotor?" asked a stern voice.)
If it's part of the same sentence, it doesn't need a capital letter.
But those are just grammar issues.
I love this whole idea, and I hope you continue it!