this was a great story!

Wow! You did a good job with this! Honestly the description is what I liked the most. With Meta Knight drowning I honestly felt like I was struggling to breath with suffocation as I read. A very uncomfortable feeling... Nice job! The story took a very different approach from similar fics I've read, and I liked that. Good job!

G: 11 out of 10

Having a bit of trouble logging in, but this was really nice. I haven't seen a headcanon with Meta Knight being the one that needed help. It's nice to see someone who made Sailor courageous and a hero c:
It makes a lot of sense that Meta Knight would have trouble swimming.

I'd love to see your little AU. I'd be interesting in seeing Dedede come by the pair of them. Great work on this 3

Ah, glad you posted this! :)
As I said earlier, I can really feel the emotions of this writing.
Your words really stand out n_n And I love the ending.

Anyways, be on the lookout(if you can) for a note on dA with a cover for this :D