Reviews for in a storm in my best dress (fearless)
Multi fandom geekerello chapter 2 . 7/11
Whoa
Okay, I'll be the first to admit that I hated what a dick Percy had become but I get what he was coming from. Everyone was superb. I loved the story. It was just so dam awesome and cry-worthy. And Thalia! God bless her, she's awesome. Piper was the best, which I loved. And yeah, I'm in love with your writing style. It's awesome
Multi fandom geekerello chapter 1 . 7/11
Whoa
I never thought I'd read about absolutely ruthless Annabeth and Percy with chronic anxiety but You have done it again.
It's like your writing is made to fit Britney Spears' Oops I did it again.
Seriously though...kitty's got claws :)
But yeah, an absolutely lovely story and another masterpiece.
Hope you're safe and everything
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7
Racist Annabeth... I don’t think I’ve seen that one done before :( I wish ir had stayed that way.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/6
Spoilers ahead:

I’m still unsure how can Percy missed Annabeth’s mark changing from yellow to red when he only had six? Or does that mean he still has the yellow mark? And I’m also unsure how they never questioned Ali if she had a soulmate mark and if she had PJ on it. Or she didn’t care?

But anyway, this story was never boring and kept me on my toes. I had fun reading this!
all about hope chapter 2 . 6/17
Aw, man. Wish you included the kiss in the story. But the rest was great. I didn’t almost cry at all at any point in the story. Totally...

all about hope
ShadowAngel100 chapter 1 . 5/23
Om...
1. Oof would not have excepted racist comments for Annabeth
2. I love the character development
3. Omg Annabeth why are you letting him get hurst?!
ILikeToReadFanasty chapter 2 . 5/20
I loved it so much! thank you for writing this
The Lil' Lion chapter 2 . 3/15
Wow again. I don't know why this is the first time I've seen a story like this, because this feel's like something I should have stumbled upon ages ago. But nevertheless, here I am, and I think I'll be staying for a while to read your other stories.

Thanks so much for sharing this story on this site, it's amazing. I guess that's all I have to say, for now.
The Lil' Lion chapter 1 . 3/15
Um, wow.

That's all I have to say for now, just wow. For one, you've written so much, and for two, it's really, really, really, good. That's true talent right there.
Green-Silver-Ravenclaw chapter 2 . 3/7
love this
Green-Silver-Ravenclaw chapter 1 . 3/7
Me. My initials are AC
lionfart chapter 2 . 2/19
oh wow i rlly am crying in the club huh. no but actually, i think i legit cried at least 4 times while reading this. its 4am, where do i even begin?
your dialogue is just *chefs kiss*. i laughed! i cried! i put my phone down and stared at a wall for 5 minutes just computing the events of this story! the way you characterized literally EVERY character is just amazing. i absolutely loved the gang, hated the mean girls, felt pain when people got hurt, and oddly felt satisfied when annabeth would fight with allison.
the callbacks to earlier moments, the intensity of the fighting and the lighthearted moments... they were all so amazing to read.
honest to god, a fic hadnt made me feel this way in so long. i could spend hours talking about how much i loved this. it really exercised the extent of how much my heart can feel? joy wise, sadness wise, and anger wise. i felt like i was in the shoes of the characters.
annabeth and percy's character development, piper's supportiveness, jason's prorectiveness (ahh i actually really lved him, his bathroom scene w percy kinda broke me), thalia's tenacity, nico's little quirks, grover's softness- everyone. everything. i feel like you had a plan fleshed out for every character, i felt it 110%. paired with the dialogue and honest to god heartwrenching plot, i didnt just read this, i devoured it.
thank you so so so much for writing this. you are so talented and i am so happy i could read your work. this is definitely going to be saved for later reading! :)
RandomFanAuthor chapter 2 . 1/21
holy FUCK! This was amazing!
Revilo202 chapter 1 . 12/31/2019
My honest thoughts about this story are that it was really really good up until Allison Cooper had came into the story. I thought that the story was progressing too fast but it was ok. But then Allison came in and completely ruined the ship. When the soul mark came into play I couldn't believe how stupid Percy was. There are so many things that could prove how wrong he was like check your mark of Annabeth, or see if you have a grey A.C, or if you have any new marks at all. But he shouldn't have needed to check I just think it isn't Percy. I know crippling anxiety is also not Percy but that part was bearable because he was still himself around his friends. He literally thinks that he has a crush on Annabeth but still thinks his soul mate is Allison. I'm just scared to find out what gonna happen next. Which is a good thing because it shows that you are doing a good job at making your readers hate your plot (not because it's bad writing but because it's... just... bad? I don't know how to express what I feel about the story. Sorry if this seems like a bad review. I don't mean to insult your writing skills it's your story, you can do whatever you want with it.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/22/2019
Kay, im a bit upset there was no Sally and no first kiss, but at least you put that at the end of the story. And i love how after Annabeth relaized or admitted or whatever that she was in love with Percy, Thalia said "Percy may be dumb, but he isn't stupid." I couldnt stop laughing for legit five minutes. That entire scene or whatever its called cracked me up. And i love how after professing their love for each other, Annabeth still threatened to pluck his eyeballs, because if that isnt Percabeth i dont know what is
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