Bro I totally love your writing it's amazing. I think you should consider posting on wattpad. People use that a lot nowadays! It's also got an easier layout for publishing stories

Great work. I wanna see Niko and the GTA4 cast interact with the GTA5 people!

Sorry my last review cut off unexpectedly. Continuing on, I felt the story could have ended on a proper finale if Tracey didn't offer to work with Smith on his trafficking mission. Now the story feels loose ended and open for a sequel. I would be interested in it as I stated in part 1 of my review.

At long last, after 2 years, this story is done and bittersweet with closure! I'm also interested in a sequel of sorts if it happens. Now I'm feeling intrigued about Tracey and Agent Smith working together in the CIA. Tracey has a lot of training to be done to be of any competent help, but she definitely has the will and her heart's in the right place. I also figured Frank wouldn't be happy with her working with the guy who kidnapped her for Madrazo in the first place. It will affect Frank and Tracey's marriage for sure. Honestl

Greatest Grand Theft Auto fanfic of all time

Okay, I think I am going to go all out on this review. I don't think that this will be a short one.

After reading the previous chapter, I wasn't sure how you would end it. I was on my toes regarding Franklin's fate but it was good to see that he was still alive. Though a part of me suspected that he would survive, there was another part of me that speculated that the sequence was a dream. Of course, him dying would have made it an emotional and dark ending. So I was glad to see that there was a time skip to the following year, with those two being married and having their child after all (If I recall, didn't you say that Tracey was pregnant with twins?).

I was also a bit nervous in seeing what the encounter with Agent Smith would have been like. I had suspected that he liked Tracey throughout the story. I don't mean it in a platonic way. Like others, I was able to see that he did actually like her. I was also hoping for Franklin not to see this because then things would have gone badly. But the way it ended, it wasn't how I expected it. If anything, it's kind of interesting for Tracey to want to maybe become a fed. If you do a sequel, I am curious as to how you will do it.

I am so glad that I came across this story more than a year ago (Yes, it was at the end of 2018, but we're still at the start of 2020, so it's basically been a year) when I came across your page after you commented on my story (More on that in a bit). This has been one hell of a ride, along with another GTA story that I have read (as well as currently reading, though I haven't read it as much as I am into reading something else right now). You made things very accurate in their portrayals. It's crazy to see how far you had gone with this story. I even remember reading in your author's note in the first one that it would be a one-shot, but you continued it. Also, it's crazy to see how this has been a project for almost two years. I know a lot of people loved my Franklin/Tracey story that I never finished, but I will say that you did a much better job at their romance (Yes, I'm being serious).

One more thing, I am almost finished with mine, but I don't want to rush it either. I'll get on it soon.

Overall, great job and hats off to you. I look forward to reading any one-shots or a sequel to this. Good luck on your novel as well. I have been telling myself to write one (And I may start soon). Much love.

Hope Frank's alright

Glad they won.

So I hope Madrazo is gone for good this time! Would be silly and far-fetched for him to be killed by trafficking girls, but it's GTA. Maybe in another lifetime Tracey and Agent Smith would be an item, but now it's the time for Tracey x Franklin. I'm sure Frank will survive even if he's laying still with his eyes open. He may have just entered some state of shock. I can't wait to see the finale next chapter.

Oh my goodness. What a chapter. Madrazo finally met his end, though it was nowhere near as gruesome as his fate in another story I have read (If you want to know, just PM me). But the end is really leaving me hanging. Man, I hope Franklin is okay. I can't wait for the conclusion. I really wonder how you will end it.

I will note that I did not expect a revelation of Madrazo to be running a human-trafficking operation. Interesting turn right there, especially when it involves something as deplorable as sex-trafficking.

But man, I am dying to know what will happen. But I'll be patient.

Hey, I usually don't do anything like this, at least not in the review section, but are you currently working on the conclusion for the story? I want to see how it will end, but if you have other things going on at the moment, I'll be patient. Hope you're doing well and I hope you have a Merry Christmas if I don't hear from you.

I hate Madrazo

Ok I'm not as mad at Agent Smith now.

Oh man Franklin's out for blood.

Noooo Smith! Why he do that?!