Sugoi

You're a good writer.

I thought the story was sensual and tasteful.

Thanks for the fic.

How could you cuck Asuka like that?

For reaal thooo, normally lemon fics are soooo cliche and tacky but this shit was WACK!

Theres always a shit ton of shinji x any female fics but there are hardly any good lemon fics with Asuka in it without shinji..

bless your sinfulness and hoping you write more fics with asuka in it !

You ruined his character

Loved this, particularly the endingGod, the feels.

So good so good this is why porn is not good because of things like this. This felt so alive so real and yet it was all a made up fantasy. Really good. If you had opted for the real route I would have liked it non the less. It was really good and believe or not it is not her wierdest couple asuka has had in FanFiction. I read touji and even gendou having their way with asuka and the one with gendou was really good. Not lemon but good

That ending though. You really know how to pull on those old heartstrings. Keep it up.

Brilliant.

Disgusting.

Disgusting.