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   WhatChuuKnowBoutMe chapter 8 . 1/31 OMG this chapter! This story! I hope you haven't left this one hanging lol. I'm still a loyal reader of it! Waiting patiently :) Okay, time for constructive feedback lol. I LOVED the part where you went in depth about Sasuke acknowledging Sakura's sex life (YES she is sleeping with other guys Sasuke- YES she has needs- YES you need to get your A into G- YES I love how you're heartbroken about it and shit- YES YES YES... ahem... sorry but I need me some justice on behalf of Sakura when it comes to Sasuke who needs to work his ass off in getting her!) However I felt a little disconnected for some reason as well... Hmm, I think I need an interaction with them together and a awkward reaction or something and maybe she see's how much it's tearing him apart or I don't know. And I kinda don't understand how it works like, does he feel her sensations when she's having sex with others or why did he say "they" were lucky partners and like how much of a visual does he get? And I need more! Heehee :) Like I said- patiently waiting. In saying this, I love seeing Sasuke suffer to some extent (Cause the asshole totally deserves it lol) but I can see he had her best interest in mind but like come on Sasu-cakes! Couldn't you have thought of something else? lol Anyways... patiently waiting XD |
| Tara Dawn Powers chapter 8 . 8/27/2019 Please return... I miss this story! Lol |
| shinez4u chapter 8 . 2/13/2019 I just stumbled across your story and an really liking it. Can't wait to read the rest to see when Sasuke is able to finally admit he loves Sakura! Keep up the great work! :) |
| scarlettwitch283 chapter 8 . 1/27/2019 I dunno if it's the same one you mentioned in your intro, but just a couple of days back, I read the first few chapters of an old fic based on a similar concept. Reading this after that was like taking a breath of fresh air after getting out of a stinky place! Can't wait to see where this will go, if you're planning to continue this. If not, thanks for sharing! You're a wonderful writer. |
| 8Lee8 chapter 1 . 12/3/2018 I really love your story. It's amazing! Will Sasuke be rogue and leave the village? It'll be very sad, if he does that... |
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/30/2018 please update this amazing fic! |
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/27/2018 please update this amazing fic! |
| Affectionate chapter 8 . 9/14/2018 Thoroughly enjoyed reading this story so far! Can'tait to continue! Your writing style is different from other stories too and I really like it! Well done |
| Affectionate chapter 4 . 9/14/2018 I really like this so far! |
| dances.with.sunflowers chapter 8 . 9/7/2018 Oh my gosh, you are so right. The whole slave/ownership scenario was very hot for a while on FF, haha, but I really like it redone here. It has a lot more weight to it, and layers, when they have an existing relationship, and Sasuke realizes the horrible consequences of what he's done. Love this modern update on an "FF classic." :) |
| Yami no Emi chapter 8 . 8/4/2018 Thanks for update! |
| marvin921 chapter 8 . 7/30/2018 The chapters are a bit short but other then that I love how genuine you make the characters feel. I hope you’ll update soon! |
| tiny.sakura chapter 8 . 7/30/2018 Sasuke deserves soooooo much pain for this. |
| annekay chapter 8 . 7/29/2018 wow this is so painful to read but very much in character...I can’t expect Sasuke to be doing anything other than what he has been doing and trying to give Sakura as much freedom as she can get. I wonder how long it will take for her to realize that and for them to finally talk. Thank you for sharing your work! Looking forward to the next chapter |
| california poppyseed chapter 8 . 7/28/2018 THAT ANAKIN STAR warS REFERENCE I STARTED SNIGGERING AT A RESTAURANT AND EVERYONE LOOKED AT ME LMAO |
