Reviews for RWBY: Heroes United
Guest chapter 110 . 7/18
Holy crap this story went off the rails!
WordSmyth chapter 5 . 7/7
Methane is colorless and odorless, and usually has some sort of sulfur compound mixed in so we can smell it if there’s a gas leak, since the human nose is hypersensitive to sulfur.
gramston chapter 16 . 7/5
You're an idiot for what you've done to this fanfic
ArashiNokitsune chapter 105 . 5/17
Why bring the cannibal back an from the world were he did kill the the kid out of spite the scum doesn’t deserve to have any existing counterparts get the frac rid of him already and any version of him the is
Omnisaurus chapter 102 . 5/6
Damn, Mordred's a fucking badass. Get out of the way Kara, I have a new favorite Nintendon!
Omnisaurus chapter 92 . 5/4
I honestly don't see why Ben couldn't have gotten a Yuki transformation. After all, Yuki-Otoko are a thing. But still, if the Omnitrix/Ultimatrix can scan DNA from mythical creatures like Yukis, then how come Ben hasn't gotten an Incubus transformation from the Succubi sisters? In fact, this question could basically extend to angels, devils/demons, nephilims like Koan & his sister, Kirby's pets and even a good majority of the participants from the Ultimate Smash Tournament (plus a giant, floating hand transformation from Master Hand & Crazy Hand).
Omnisaurus chapter 79 . 5/4
'I wonder if Daddy has been to these worlds.'
Is that foreshadowing I see? If so, then I have two words to say if Transformers: Prime is involved.
Fuck. Yes.
Omnisaurus chapter 70 . 5/3
Ben: *disintegrates Scales*
Most People: He deserved it.
Some People: What a horrible thing to do!
Me: What a waste of perfectly good Snake Faunus DNA.

For the absolute amount of zero people who care, Ben has Faunus DNA for Arctic Fox, Bat, Bengal Tiger, Cat, Chameleon, Dog, Dragon, Eagle, Lion, Monkey, Persian Cat, Shark, Spider, Squirrel, Rabbit and Wild Fox Faunus.
He has met/had the opportunity to get (yet hasn’t) the DNA of Bull, Corsac Fox, Deer, Fennec Fox, Fish, Gerbil, Lizard, Panther, Penguin, Scorpion, Sheep, Snail and Snake Faunus from people he has encountered of canonical Menagerie background characters.
Faunus DNA he could probably get if he searched around enough are Crocodile and Puma.
Yes, I really did make a list of all the different Faunus subspecies he has encountered and gotten DNA from in the past. Also, FUCK YEAH, MONSTERVERSE KAIJU DNA! Although Titanus is used incorrectly in the Monsterverse universe (implying that Godzilla, Mothra, Kong and all the other kaiju are closely related species of the same genus), I’m still looking forwards to seeing Monsterverse kaiju show up.
Omnisaurus chapter 69 . 5/3
Cinder: My plan to get the rest of the maiden powers is coming along perfectly!
Vilgax: Hey, I’ma steal your maiden powers now. Thanks for the donation.
Cinder: * S*

Also, I just now realized, shouldn’t Ben have gotten an incubus form from the succubus sisters?
Omnisaurus chapter 68 . 5/3
NNNNNNOOOOOOOOO! NOT MARTY!
Omnisaurus chapter 58 . 5/2
It’s cool that Ben got a Space Dragon form, but I’m a little bummed he didn’t get Zebesian or Chozo forms as well. Oh well, I’ll take what I can get.
Omnisaurus chapter 52 . 5/1
Winter: "What's a dinosaur?"
Six: "Basically, giant lizards that roamed our planet before Humans. They all died out when a meteor hit the planet 65 million years ago.
Me: *triggered sounds at the lizard comment before making a small portal and reaching my hand through to bitch slap Six*
thermalsnipern7 chapter 102 . 4/27
I haven't exactly been keeping up with this very well. Why does Rouge hat Ruby for leaving?

Seriously, when you have control over time, you need to have a deep sense of understanding. That's my view on it at least.
ArashiNokitsune chapter 98 . 4/7
The light is fading...
AnimeGoji91 chapter 96 . 4/5
And also no I don't like Helen that is all!?
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