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Loki? A rapist?

I really don't think this is a place to write rape stories. If you find this stuff sexy I suggest you actually make her have an inner conflict and then side with the naughty side. Not be forced to do it repeatedly, constantly begging him to stop.

Rape is never sexy or acceptable.

how about giving this a second chapter

That was really nice ! Maybe a new chapter could give us some insight on the few daysmonths that followed? :D

After all that, I guess falling asleep with a god buried in you would seem like a compromise. :)