I meant to say this months ago, but I’m really getting into how your making the mood for the Argus part of the story. I especially like how Sora was making those theories about the relic, ironwood, and winter too. I know you’re busy with the boruto and kingdom hearts crossover, but I hope you continue with this story soon.

I love it when Sora met Ruby.

And your title reminds me of the main villain from American Dragon Jake Long

Haven't really seen Sora fight to peak performance up to this point, hope that changes.

Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next and I really like these questions sora is asking and I am glad to see this updated

Nice to see an update, I also like that you have Sora questioning things, he’s the kind of person Oz needs in his group instead of another yes man.
While I hope the group will tell Ironwood the truth as well as Sora’s plan I don’t think it’ll work. One of my favorite RWBY YouTubers Unicorn of War did a review and analysis on Vol. 7 and they argued even if Ruby told the truth it may have changed anything. Give it a look.
Now I have an idea to get the group to Atlas they use Roxas. What I mean Roxas is a wanted man so the group acts like they captured him and want to go to Atlas to get the bounty. Theirs also the Organization to consider I can see one coming to Argus to capture him and spread chaos along the way. All in all good work.

I also recall, from the episode, that Salem's immortal curse would only end when she ACCEPTED the difference between life and death.

It's been a while of this story.

Hallelujah! Finally the new chapter I'm happy that phyrra live but still blame herself for xion death i hope to see that you made xion be resurrect in the second keyblade war (hope you make the kh3 keyblade war arc plus remind dlc make weiss have kairi keyblade temporary to fight armor master xehanort) i hope you make blake, yang vs adam then riku vs adam so that when adam his kill ansem find his body and make him be a temporary seeker of darkness so that adam no longer follow he world of remnant burn when master xehanort summon Kingdom Hearts and he want revenge on riku of you make adam be resurrect by ansem.

Hope in the kh3 arc you make the 7 guardians of light vs the 13 seeker of darkness but who will be the last guardian since kairi his death, anyways i make the organization have their DLC data skill in the keyblade war to make the heroes more difficult to fight them and to make phyrra, sora, weiss, lea, vs xemnas and saix then the roxas return (that was a epic moment) xion return light (to make phyrra cry) and then weiss getting kidnap like xemnas like kairi finally sora, roxas, xion, phyrra vs saix (basically it's like the kh3 game).but i hope you make the heros team be separate in the keyblade war when xehanort summon his labyrinth in the keyblade graveyard.

Did you see the new kingdom hearts memories of melody i hope you make sora vanish like in kh3 when he save weiss by abusing the power of waking and make weiss have her own story and seeing kairi memories inside her heart for the mysteries and the mysterious subject X that xehanort was experimenting and then vanish without trace.

His yozora will appear if you make sora vanish.

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So happy that this story has been updated since there hasn't been a new chapter in a while, hope the next chapter will be a long one again

Glad your back! Don’t worry about making it a short chapter, just glad to have a good read at it. Stay safe and stay healthy!

I hope you continue with this story and I would love to see yang lose her heart and becomes darkness. It would make it more intense

In that case, I hope your version of our heroes will be able to convince Ironwood better than the original episode. Maybe when we reach that point, Master Yen Sid, with his magic, can appear in the room, while Mickey calls over the Gummi Phone?

Loving this very much. Can't wait for the next chapter

Hey, don't keep us waiting. I want to know what happens next.

Despite the combat scenes being bad it’s a good story keep writing I really what to how Weiss will react to venitus