I really liked how you portrayed the Harvest God in this story. His dialogue and his absence from parts of Molly's life were very realistic. He and your Molly work well together. It must be rough for Molly to have to deal with everyone's misconception and be alone so often. Molly seems tough enough to handle it though. Florian is a lovely name.

Overall, you wrote a great story for your prompt word. I couldn't tell that it was rushed, and I enjoyed reading it.

This was so sweet! (Also, terrifying.) And a really good take on your prompt word!

After writing you Limerence back in 2016, I have really soft spot for the Harvest King x Molly. And you really hit that spot with this story.

I LOVE your version of Molly, fiery red-head (okay, auburn), you go and tell off a god, you got it girl! Also I wanna know what Irene did, your version of Molly can put her in her place, I know it!

But that ending was very sweet, and Florian is such a nice name! I love this all around!

Oh, wow. I really liked this one. I love how you showed the Harvest God's absence in the town and how it shaped others' opinions of Molly. Speaking of, I love your Molly. She's a stubborn little firecracker, isn't she? Haha, I loved her impatience with Finn as he was hovering by the bathroom door. Your descriptions of childbirth being both ugly and beautiful at the same time really stuck with me, although I would suggest adding more discomfort and pain after childbirth as well - she seems to have recovered a little too quickly.

Your depiction of the Harvest God really shined in this story. The way he thinks about things is so different than mortals. It could be taken as him being cold and unfeeling, but to him, mortals are just a small piece of the big picture. The loving way he ran a bath for Molly and their son was really sweet and it was a good way to show that he does deeply love his family despite his cold mannerisms.

I would seriously love to see an extension on this one, even if it becomes a series of drabbles where the Harvest God learns to understand humans a bit better and he and Molly learn how to become parents. I seriously love the dynamic you've created with them in this, and it honestly doesn't feel rushed to me at all. I really enjoyed this!