It is too bad that you never finished this story.

Shitfic.

Please update. You mentioned you have it finished. So finish it.

The Michael/Neville thing is driving me nuts. Not clear at all.

WTF? Who the fuck is Michael Bain? Did you go to an alternate universe? Are you high? Have you fucked up your stories and crossed them? WTF?

Fuck Dumbledore. What a twat.

Poor Ginny. Never had a chance. Hogwarts is a bit of a shit show. Loving this story.

Interesting start. I always like Luna way of seeing things.

thank you for this awesome fic and i really hope you finish it, looking forward for the next chapter.

Did you know that you put “Barthy” for “Barty” when talking about Barty Crouch Senior and Junior?

I understand the need for setting up the plot but the backstory seems too long winded

Just a bit of spelling feedback. When discussing the defense primer you mention meta-technics and technic. I believe that you're actually referring to a technique which is a way of doing something.

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and enjoyed it a lot.

Great chapter! I really like how you have everything set up for the big finale. I also enjoyed getting all of the different POV's from so many different characters. Looking forward to seeing how everything plays out, so hoping for bad things to happen to Tom, Peter, Barty Jr, and Dumbledore especially. Wouldn't mind Ron to get knocked down a little too, lol.

Very intense...