hahaha Now that was funny ! very accurate I would say
and about raph being the most popular, I think that's true, although I think usually it's between Leo and Raph. those two are the most popular.
though I myself am a Leo fangirl

Ah, that was awesome, Ramica. I can picture the guys discussing fan fics. Makes me wonder what they'd talk about if they could read even more of today's stories. Now those are out there. Nicely done on this.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

im not even going to ask...that was just, well, un enjoyable for me.

omg i was laughing my butt off bro ham can you do more little things on this i love it when people write about what would happen if characters read fanfiction

lovely yours

chocolate E

Lmao. I think that is exactly how they would react! Its brilliant! Don't think i've laughed that much in a while. Lmao. In fact, im still laughing! Aw, brilliance. Glad i read this, might do some research on turtle anatomy before i start writing my fanfic ;) you never know whos reading it. lol.

Genius.

Now that was funny! I bet that's what their reactions would be if they discovered the site!

I was really surprised at how educated this fanfic was. I actually did a project on reptiles, which means I also had to research reproduction (in which sperm is deposited into the cloaca where the eggs are kept until the outer membrane is developed enough to the point where the female can deposit the eggs until they hatch) and other interesting facts.

I don't mind turtle 'lovey-dovey' situations, but the lemons seem a bit awkward. As if the author was trying their best to describe it in a 'not-awkward' way. (Pretty ironic, no?)

But since they were mutated into HUMANoids, we can still assume the 'family jewels' were move to the typical spot found on human males, OR we can assume they are still in the cloaca. It seems like it could go either way. O Look at me babbling! I still enjoyed the story, so keep it up! )

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I was laughing my ass off that is so true good point of view of what they would think. It's true though Raph get's most of the girls because maybe cause of his tough attitude i love this one great work! You rock!

Hey! That was to funny! I loved it! Hehe _

I guess it is true in the fanfic world of mature stories...Raph does seem to get the girls most of the time...hehe _

Great job on this! I almost was laughing my butt off...

Great joB! Hehe :D

I've read this before, but apparently I forgot to review. Anyway, good story! I can certainly understand Donny's statement about why Raph get the girls:

“ No personally, I think it’s your bad boy attitude Raph. I’ve heard say that lots of girls go for that sort of thing. Figure on taming the wild spirit with their love” Don theorized.

But if I were to have a romantical relationship with a turtle, it'd be Donny. He's the sweetest. I wouldn't have sex with him, though, but I'm sure that I wouldn't mind a good snog... *gets dreamy eyes while thinking of Don*

I don't think that you have to rate it M, T should be enough. Sure, there are plenty of sexual references, but it's not THAT graphic.

Anyway, great job!

Take care,

Idun

Interesting...lol this was funny good job!

Monny

that was... uumm... wierd. and from reading Therefore I Am, i actually know what 'the family jewels' are.

yeah, i've always wondered how turtles would have sex like in some of your stories cuz you can't tell where their jewels are...

i had this idea like smackdab in the middle of the story that you could make a sequal/2nd chapter to this story where mike or one of the others gets a ffnet account of their own and wrotes the TRUTH.

this was funny, but know I have the anatomy in my story al wrong! actully only the male anatomy, oh well I'll just say the mutation changed it and put it in a differant place

this is of my #1 fav stories ever written by you /\\ i like the guys attitude and how they talked about sex /\\ you did a great job...i am proud of you