I read the description and immediately became interested; I gotta say that I really like the story so far! :P Keep up the great work. I look forward to your next update :)

Ooh, that was nice. Good bees confession with the right mix of angst but also sweetness. Sun being good fren. Cant wait to see what happens!

good start, just please continue.

Please update sooner then 6 mo the later this time. I actually forgot what was going on by the time this updated.

I just wanted to say, that I'm glad that you've added more to this story.

Ok, I like it. Where's the rest of it?

This is a good example of the most frustrating thing in fanfiction. The one's seem like they'll turn out good, almost always never finish.

Ahh I hope you can update soon! I already love where this fic is going - I'm really curious to see if Rooster Teeth will decide to bring Ilia to Atlas (they should, since she's mentioned it so much) and how her and Ilia will interact- this gives a little bit of a prediction/insight. Keep it up!

Really liking it so far, good work!

Kali is best milf. Lol. Thank you for the update.

Great concept, but moving alittle slow for my tastes.

Can't wait to see where you take this.

I love this story so far! I’m excited to see where it goes and I’ll be eagerly awaiting the next update

Wow really good so far.

I still love this fic. Pacing is good and the raw emotion is spot on. Thank you for the update.

I am kind of curious how this will play out. I'm only hoping that Weiss isn't one of the ones laughing prior to the broken teeth incident... I can't imagine Weiss being that heartless about things like that.

-A.W.R. II