*how Hinata be like*
HINATA: I CAN'T FAP TO THESSSS! (faps anyways)

Whoa, chill, I don't know whether is the las sentence is necessary but holy shiz this one is pretty hot. Even though it is pwp and short, but this one still nicely written. Good job and kudos to that.

I liked your hentai fic. you showed quickly how Naruto and Sakura maybe savage lovers.

Oh...this is pretty neat

Honestly surprised the mods let this stay up

If you haven’t already, post to AFF when you get the chance. If nothing else, you’ll get better than quibbling from small minds.

As a parting comment, I’d say you should connect the dots better. Even though you communicate what’s happening, there’s no clear indication or tangible logic to it. You could just call it PWP and be done with it, but that’s such a cop-out.

I wonder if you are doing a story after the 4th war or how naruto is hokage anyway you're amazing It was hot I love it I want more