| Reviews for The Invisible Line |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 11/10/2018 MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE. PLEASE CONTINUE |
 sherryfanfic1999 chapter 1 . 9/24/2018 WOW! This is hot and heavy! |
| Cleoru Misumi chapter 1 . 2/15/2018 Ohhhhhhhhhh me like it! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/13/2018 This was just amazing. And the sex part almost made me bleed from my nose. The ending was the best part though |
| Unknown chapter 1 . 2/11/2018 Beautiful, and hot :3 |
| Raburesu-kun chapter 1 . 2/12/2018 The story itself was quite interesting and I found it a good read. But I did find a lot of mistakes in it like some grammar, repeated spelling errors and small instances where a word was added that didn't need to. I could tell you all the mistakes and critiques I would make if you want me to. But if you re-read it and/or check it through a correctional system you should be able to fix most of them. All in all, I still enjoyed reading it and found you did well with the new style for your first attempt. Can't wait to see what you write next! ;p |
| saku015 chapter 1 . 2/12/2018 Awe, this is so cute! And hot... really hot... I loved it, thank you! |
| Alex098 chapter 1 . 2/11/2018 Loved it |
