So is this fic dead?

Question! Is Spitter, Buzzshock, or more reasonably Arcticguana or Feedback in his arsenal?

love this, they're just so darn cute together and this was the first fic, not just of Ben-10 but of any childhood show, that was actually good and not the literary equivalent of a 5 year olds 'drawings'.

Are you dead.

Understandable.
Can't wait to see the rework then.

Great chapter here, I really enjoyed it.
Seeing Ben so interested in learning about Remnant is really nice. At first I was a little iffy about it, but your reasoning to back it made me really comfortable in the decision.
I also liked the bit in the clothing store. It was fun and I got a good laugh at the idea of Khali wanting a son and teasing them, haha.
And everything with Roman and Glynda and all was very well written and enjoyable.
I especially love the dynamic you've got going on between Ben and Blake.
Good work.

So this is interesting to say the least. I'll admit, the surprise that you were using 11 year old Ben over his teenage incarnation was surprising considering the ages of the other characters and all of that jazz. I'll say that it has me curious as to why you decided to make that choice.
But the story so far is interesting to say the least and am very pleased with the way this is being written. The budding friendship between Blake and Ben is nice and I'm very curious to see how that's gonna play out especially if you decide to do some version of The Fall of Beacon and Volume 4. I'm a little iffy on Blake telling Ben her entire life story considering everything, but I suppose we'll see. I really appreciate the emotion, the way they related and all that jazz.
Oh and thank you, thank you for not doing Ben with anyone in this story considering how young he is. Some people are weird and well, yeah. Also, I am curious about how you'll incorporate Ultimates if you do decide to include them.
I'm liking this so far and can't wait to see where you take it. Good job.

Hi there. I am really excited about the new write, hope to see it soon.

Merry Christmas djde

Yes! I've been waiting for an update or something

Well I hope the rewrite will be good!

I'll see ya there!

Rewriting a story that barely got past its introduction in the first place... seems legit.

I'm joking, if you honestly feel you can do better if you redo it I look forward to it. This fic's set up is unique and interesting, and I hope you to see it blossom into an amazing story.

So far a good revision is optional for the first 2 chapters, and I guess you're going for an approach where in Ben isn't going to be noticed until called by the staff by the end of the Initiation. Once a month sounds best from you. Suggesting a writing group may take chapters at least 3 weeks or 2 and a half if dedicated. Nice to see you back in action sir.

That great to hear that you back. I amongst other love this story, and am glad to hear that you. I understand what you are saying.

Alrighty then! I BELIEVE IN YOU, MY DUDE!