eh the dice rolls and the quirky sleep schedule, I'm done. You write extremely well, but those elements are more than what I want to read about a power fantasy.

I always figure when authors say they rolled dice, it's more they're unconfident in their own decisions and are hedging.

Great job on this chapter and good scenes!

shouldn't this be ascent 2-3, not awoken?

you should keep the gamer shit on spacebattles and sufficient.

Interesting scene!

Good Chapter!

Good to see more from this. You decided to cross the Saints with Worm? Delightful... such a thing demands an M rating of course; the Saints cannot be censored! Regardless, good luck.

I liked the chapter.

Interesting begining, then I had to stop - breaking the 4 wall became unbearable.

well done you, for grabbing my interest faster than a 'free icecream' sign.

Yes. Lets lie by ommission again and not tell the other guy that his buddy was clinically dead for a few seconds! Totally the thing to do!

I'm surprised Zach didn't realise from him admitting he can revive the recent deceased that he straight up killed Über before reviving him. Still, this is interesting. I wonder how Über will react to being killed and resurrected only to find his partner is still working with his killer.

Nice job on this chapter and great scene!

So is he ever gonna tell Uber and L33t the truth of his powers, or does he intend to abandon them latter, making telling them pointless and even potentially harmful? Either way, he's gonna have a tough time hiding the true nature of his powers as he gets stronger.