Reviews for Lillian Jean Potter
Guest chapter 5 . 2/16
More please
AstralGemini chapter 5 . 3/12/2019
jasper
animerule64 chapter 5 . 10/5/2018
Add more chapters please
Guest chapter 5 . 7/23/2018
Sam or Jasper
astridschuehle chapter 5 . 7/5/2018
Seth please

I like the story so far. Will you explain, why Lilian had to go to the Grangers?

You should work a bit at your writing-style. I don't have the feeling of reading a story, more like reading facts. Maybe a Beta would help?

Love
Astrid
fifespice chapter 5 . 7/3/2018
blooming nora how will harry take that
KittyWolfM chapter 4 . 6/12/2018
She do go with Jasper or Paul maybe even Edward. Not a big fun of Bella. Who ever you pick will be awesome. Looking forward to seeing what happens next
sn0wy.mk21 chapter 4 . 6/10/2018
i think Hermione should be with ... Jared, Jacob or Seth that's my main choices for her and for Harry maybe with Leah, and they don't get along with Bella.
morgan.s.hyde chapter 4 . 6/5/2018
Jasper please
afraidofspiders chapter 3 . 4/8/2018
are you going to continue this one? you have me hooked
Quileutepack.Seth16 chapter 2 . 2/28/2018
I really like this story :) plssssssssss update soon
Padfootette chapter 2 . 2/28/2018
Loved it please update soon
KittyWolfM chapter 1 . 2/21/2018
Looking forward to seeing what happens next.