Reviews for Forever
DoctorWho507 chapter 1 . 3/11
Let me guess, when Ace died, you went berserk didn't you?
gwencarson126 chapter 1 . 12/25/2018
yes yes yes make more
AriellaTularyn chapter 1 . 2/14/2018
I'm pretending this happened... I don't care what anyone says.
Tilkghamer21 chapter 1 . 2/10/2018
This story is getting really good and I personally think that you should continue on this story because this ASL story is quite honestly the best ASL fic I have seen so I and most likely others would kindly ask you to Continue on this story. _
XFangHeartX chapter 1 . 2/9/2018
Not bad!
w1lliam chapter 1 . 2/9/2018
fist of all, nice what if
second: please make a series of it, but try to set a target, make one story arc first and then the next, make sure you can finish the story to a statisfying point. in an ideal worl that would be until the epilogue of canon,but even tomething like just fishman island is great, or even going on utill the crew gets back together at wano (which is hopefully sometime this year)

bottom line is, im all for it, but only do it if you feel you can keep going untill you reach a, at least somewhat, statisfying conclusion. i have seen dozens of great or interesting stories die because the writer didnt have a plan

Cya:) William;)
sdkop21 chapter 1 . 2/9/2018
OMG! This was amazing! You should totally do a ASL story with the Whitebeard Pirates involved! With Marco, Thatch and Izo travelling with Ace and Sabo to sail with Luffy's crew to the point where Marineford is supposed to happen (don't include Marineford, have Thatch survive, and Whitebeard and Ace live). I would love to see a type of story like that! Just a suggestion, but consider the ideas! Keep up writing stories!