The parvati one was written pretty well. You don't normally see writing that good in smut fics. Good job!

good

In an effort to stop this myth propagating, it is NOT supposed to hurt for a girl to lose her virginity, if it does you didn't engage in nearly enough warm up. There can be, though it isn't guaranteed, some mild discomfort to the first time, but it should register as a dull ache, not a spike of pain. Very, very, very rarely the woman in question will have been born with an unperforated hymen that has avoided damage up until then. This is the sole case where biology may result in unavoidable pain, but is statistically rarer than your odds to be hit by lightening.

Seeing as this just "updated" and by that I mean you took down the author's note does that mean we'll be seeing more of this soon? Maybe? Please?

Wish this had continued

Why is an update showing for this story when there is no chapter for the update?
Is this a prank to get out hopes up?

I cannot find chapter 3

Lol

Until next time, buddy. :/

Wow...RiP

Still pretty good, but you pulled even more from the whosyourdaddy story, like whole sentences. Then the bit about going in the wrong hole was pulled almost word for word from the bromance fic.

It's not bad, but some of the action is ripped directly from 'It Could Only Happen to Harry.' I remember some of the phrases from that story, and theri repeated here.

I’m sorry to hear about your loss. The community will remember him.

I'm sorry for your family's loss, my thoughts are with your family.

Sad to hear that. This community remembers. May his soul rest in peace.