nice man. honestly, with the details of the lemons surprised no one's reported you. it gets a bit tricky to follow your dialouge sometimes, honestly.

man this is hot.

I'm honestly a bit conflicted about the whole scenario. On one hand, as a Tokine/Yoshimori shipper I'm happy to see those two together in some way. But on the other hand, I don't think either of the two is consenting to sex. Though I still enjoy the pairing.

Still, after so long, I'm glad to see that someone is still writing Tokine/Yoshimori. I honestly thought that Kekkaishi FanFiction was dead. But at least I'll have your fanfic to enjoy. Can't wait for June!

wow, this is fun. I like this one. bringing Yoshimori in. with all the lust increasing, it must be an succubus or incubus

very nice. someone controlling the cockroaches. I wonder if it's the same one that made Tokine fondle herself

Love it so far, please continue

nice one. that was an entertaining scene. and it's always funny putting in a cockroach. I remember when he first went into the Yukimura house, and she was so scared and close to him

um, is this ever getting continued? you have a habit of not finishing stories. not that I'm one to talk

Looking forward to the rest of your story!