I had been putting off this chapter for a while because I didn't want it to end, but I finally gave in. I got through the last sentence was like "NOOOOOOOO, it's over! No more!" But then I saw your AN and I immediately had hope again! Yay for more reading!

I thought this was a nice ending, very well written, and a seamless transition into the next phase of Stefano's life to where the origins of the second game starts. Thumbs up to the interview. Sneaky Stefano got passed the "all-knowing" Hoffman. So bad! Can't wait for what you write about him next! Thank you for a good read! xoxo

She ... missed ... the psychopathy ... :0

I truly enjoyed this from beginning to end. I loved the way the story unfolded and how you managed to smoothly incorporate it to the game's own story.

I'll be looking forward to those sequels!

Things are getting quite interesting. I wonder how Jackson's going to react to the news.

Hope to read more from you soon!

WHAAAAAT?! You mean it's been her this WHOLE time?! Now I want to know what really happened that night! I swear this is professionally written. Everything is timed and written so well, I'm glad I get to read it for free! Give me more, please! I gotta know what happens!

I'm honestly speechless over what happened in the last chapters. I never saw it coming and thought that this would take on a very different route. It's absolutely brilliant.

Lovely work, as always.

Until next time!

Loved these last two chapters! I'm particularly fond of the newspaper bits, they seem to add so much depth to the story. I certainly wasn't excepting how this chapter ended and I can't wait to see more of it!

I'm in love with this story. I just found it yesterday and I couldn't stop reading it. Stefano is quite a character and I'm fascinated with the way you portrayed him. His development seems natural, organic and a perfect fit. Your OCs are great too and I'm looking forward to know more about them.
I also love that you added Italian aspects to the story (I'm studying Italian, so it was fairly exciting to see both the language and part of the culture in here).
Hope to read more from you soon!

Spoiled much? Lol. I like how you're delving into Celestina's history now, though I'm pretty concerned, yet curious, about her sister's behaviors and mindset. Poor mouse! Of course it had emotions! Maybe next as complex as some human emotions can get, but they still have feelings. Looking forward to the little girls' performances!

Awwww, poor Giacomowhat's gonna happen to Stefano now that his BFF is gone? With no one to guide him back to morality, that psychopathic side of him might start to come out more and more, like in this chapter. Stefano knew what he did to Lucia, he just probably surprised he was capable of feeling that way and actually doing something about it. Great chapter! Can't wait for more!

I love the flashbacks of Stefano's early life. It adds so much and reminds us that he was once innocent. As for the overall story, you have it so well thought out, it feels like a crime show on tv and we, the readers, have to piece it together. Not to mention your quality of writing is superb! Like, really superb. You have so much knowledge of what you're writing on, I wonder if you go and research for days about the subject before you write or if it's already prior knowledge to you. Reading this is always getting another piece of the puzzle, so keep the updates coming!

Oh dear. This is getting intense - more intense. So hoping Ledford can resolve this case quickly!

Marie, Marie - you really should have taken a self-defense course when you had the chance.

Hm, I really hope Ledford gets the evidence he needs to nail these two. He really needs to search their home. Probably should have done that before arresting Stefano. I really hope the missing person isn't dead yet - Sexy Detective must save the day!

EEE I've known too many people like Celestina - folks who can turn on the emotional display at will to suit their purpose. Manipulators - you have written her very well.

The interrogation scene was interesting. I think, if possible, I hate Stefano even more. I love a bad guy I can really hate!