Reviews for All of this Incandescence
Notary Sojac chapter 20 . 7/19
Oh dear. That happened. This has the potential to blow up in some very interesting ways. Also, it's interesting hearing about Beatrice getting future information that didn't come from the show, and I'm really curious what's going on here. There definitely seems to be something besides her coming from a universe where Doctor Who was a TV show going on here, and I can't wait to find out what.
That's Balderdash chapter 20 . 7/18
Cool chapter :D
Lil'Sparrow7 chapter 20 . 7/18
Swiller no swiping, Doctor!
Lol this was a good short installment! Glad you aren’t giving up on this fic!
That's Balderdash chapter 19 . 7/8
cool chapter
Lil'Sparrow7 chapter 19 . 7/7
Nice chapter! Keep up the good work
SnowCatt chapter 19 . 7/7
XD
Notary Sojac chapter 19 . 7/7
It's great to see a new update of this! Also, I was definitely feeling Beatrice's awkwardness in this chapter, and get it. Talking to people is stressful enough without seeing the future and things exploding around you. Also, I loved the line "Oh, thank God, a distraction". It is such a mood.
AlidaLynn chapter 18 . 6/8
It's always cool to see someone come back, no matter how long the break! Even if some parts are summaries, I'll love learning more about Beatrice's story. The opening adventure was spooky! Then there's that bit about Beatrice "knowing" it's her fault she's in the Whoniverse, followed up by the first of the strange nightmares? And the fun original adventures! I really hope the Doctor eventually believes her about the show, though - he is so pigheaded.
Notary Sojac chapter 18 . 5/18
Wow! It's great to see you updating again! I really liked the last two lines, where she is saying that the best thing about her situation was the fact that she could see the stars, and that it wasn't much, but it was something at least. I just want to give Beatrice a hug, a cup of tea, and the chance for her to be away from impending doom/danger.
Lil'Sparrow7 chapter 18 . 5/15
Dude I’m so happy you are coming back to this story!
Guest chapter 18 . 5/15
Damn, I had to double take when I saw there was an update lol, well kudos to still being here :) I look forward to what you do with the plot
studentloans chapter 18 . 5/14
I gave this a quick reread since you updated to look at the story all at once. W/ the added perspective that this story was written at a lonely time in your life that made it a bit sadder to read! Especially with the implied oncoming death and decay of Beatrice. I'm glad that isn't the case anymore!

This story has a lot of fun and original ideas, and it throws them at the reader fast. There was always something intensely going on. Even in third person persoective, this feels like a deeply personal story that has a lot of voice in the way first person stories tend to. I'm also glad you chose the cowboy episode to step into as an episode bc cowboys are a lot of fun. It's like they just can't escape the midwest. Thanks for writing what you habe, and revisiting this story! Im also revisiting the self inserts i wrote in my first semster at college bc quarantine so i think it's funny to see this is a common line of thought
Have a nice one
That's Balderdash chapter 18 . 5/14
Amazing
bored411 chapter 16 . 3/19
just found this and can't wait to see how it goes, so i hope you update this soon! :)
cruelzy chapter 17 . 12/31/2019
This was just lovely, looking forward to whatever you'll do next
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