at this point of the story , i don't even understand this story anymore, i'm forcing myself to read it, but that never ends well.

If they think they can get away with throwing random weapons at people, I wouldn't be surprised if they returned the favor when they aren't blocking :P

Good chapter, I can't say I expected Tsunade as a team leader

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Adding to my previous review, Haruo is a great example. Even with only what I've seen so far, I actually hate him. He's incredibly grating, and unlikable. I applauded your writing in getting such feelings to come forth for a fictional character. But I can read it because I dont want to voluntarily subject myself to that feeling. An amazing story, especially for such an overworked premise as reincarnation, but not for me.

It's well written. It's a interesting plot. I think it's a great story, but some of the characters are just so easy to hate and some act (in character) dumb. I'm not trying to say the character's concept is dumb, it's great, I just find myself hating them for how they act. I'm not trying to be criticizing, I think the story is perfect as is, I just cant read it. It makes me feel actual anger and hate for some characters. And that's amazing, bit I can do that.

like your story a lot. with regards to your a.n. at the bottom i would like both faster updates and longer ones. 100k words a day is preferable.
for real tho, i like the longer chapters as opposed to more frequent teaser chapters.
also i applaud your decision to have him. spread the knowledge of canon, because that’s how things can get chaotic af.
i read a terrible si fic recently and i refused to read past ten chapters because it followed cannon word for word and had the si share some of the other character’s lines.
you obviously know your stuff and that makes your story awesome.

I dont care either your chapter are short or long ... at least dont make them too short ... just continue to write ... this is one of my favourite story .

Hmmm def a divergence now . Hopefully that'll make tsunami stay in the village.

Orchi genin team ? Now thats would be intresting

Cmon Orochimaru, don't turn bad now.

A lot of problems wouldn't exist if you took out Danzo and his version of Root, really. Without Danzo, Pein would not be as trigger-happy and emo, cos Yahiko would not be killed on Danzo's orders. Without Danzo, Itachi will still be around with a strong Uchiha clan less likely to rebel because he won't be there to push Tobirama's anti-Uchiha sentiments onto the rest. Sasuke will be less likely to hate Konoha too. Without Danzo, Orochimaru will not have as easy a time attacking during the Chunin exams etc. etc.

I'll watch this.

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gooooooooooooooooood