morning after chapter ... yes please!

oh my god this was so good, holy fuck. please write more stuff like this1

OMG! Definitely one of the best Darvey fics I have read. So good! So passionate!

loved this i just love ur writing!

I loved every scene! Can’t believe that I missed this. One of my favorites of all time!

Loved this Darvey story. Very well written. It really sounds like Donna/Harvey. Well done ! Mary x

Finished that in one go! A storyline so deserving of them, finally meeting each other head on. Pun intended... Damn hot writing!

Very good story

That’s a one shot to beat! Well done! The intensity of their showdown! I was so worried there.. but had faith in you! Another Excellant story thank you!

Such outstanding accomplishments by two very essential characters: Power Outage and Lightning. Without their impeccable timing, ‘Red’ and ‘Whipped’ would still be ruling TensionLand. :P I braced myself at the beginning for the strain and burn. Then, Harvey said IT. (*yes! mental applause) I must thank both your amazing writing (and the slow elevator) for that defining moment. You’ve given this piece so many epic lines - of which I won’t elaborate or will end up quoting a lot of you (back) to you. Oh, Harvey carrying Donna piggyback (or donkey-back?) is something I’d love to see happen someday. (*me, still hopelessly hopeful). How you’re able to take us from super angsty to super sweet to super steamy is...is...(Brain. Melted. So. Will. End. This. With. My. Most. Sophisticated. Review. Ever.): Ahhh!

I can actually not find the words to express how perfect this is. FUCKING INCREDIBLE is about as close as I'm going to get. You need to write more Darvey smuff like yesterday! Xx

and part 2. THE TEASING skldhgksdfjl I love it. Can't believe she goes down on him in the kitchen because they're that horny hehe. AND THEN YOU HAVE THEM SET UP ALL THE CANDLES. because they actually want to see each other, X_X and he calls her beautiful, Again. kfljsdjkl this scene is so hot and so them, the teasing.. the impatience, yet 'torturing' each other.. Donna watching a naked Harvey and just being :') about it but she won't show him so she just teases him some more. They'll be like this. S8 where are you? He's talking about her hair *sobs again* that's what his dreams are made of. 'BEING WHIPPED SUITS YOU' 'BEING COVERED IN WHIPPED CREAM SUITS YOU' iM SCREAMING! 1) he will be so whipped, that's just a fact and I need someone to tease him about that.. but how he countered that. PHEW I NEED THEM TO 'TALK' ABOUT IT. AFTER their second first time, show that they indeed both still remember everything. HE MENTIONS HER COFFEE. DO YOU WANT ME DEAD? all the whipped cream talk, her sending him to the fridge. WATCHING HIM AGAIN. gosh.. the teasing, I'm repeating myself but skhlfldkjfgd that entire scene with them using the whipped cream and the references to the other time, this is so freaking perfect and hot.. and I can just see them laugh so much. THEY WILL BE SO HAPPY. THis was great. thanks for sharing. loved it.

ok so I read this last nigh till 1.30 am, and I was trash af skfljksdhfgl but I don't like leaving reviews from my phone so here we go. I love Donna is the on to go to him, I can totally see her do that. It feels like she has made up her mind and will fight more to get her point across and this was exactly that, that flashback tho.. when he said go. *heart breaks* And Harvey fully aware they're about to fight is still concerned about her being soaked because of the storm, we love one supportive husband. THE WAY SHE STORMS IN, I love how she's all FIRE and he's trying to talk calmly dfkldjsfgd I can see that happening. 'I didn't ask you to ignore ME' *sobs* i love how she pointed out that to her for most of the years he treated her as just his secretary, while both deep down know it's not that and has never been that and Harvey - stupid with words - Specter obviously starts talking about work. Gosh.. I love how canon it is that after he say something off/hides behind work he comes out with these ! lines and here you do that too with 'you are all I have been able to see'dklfsjkdlfg DONNA SAYING SHE NOW REGRETS THE KISS. I AM NEAR TEARS. I mean we all know she won't, not the action but like you said.. If she feels like she's losing her best friend over it, I could see her say that as a way to just let it all go. And Harvey actually tells her none of this is her fault, she deserves to hear this so much. What he did and why, I really hope we get that on the show too. YOU HAVE HER SAY SHE MISSES HIM AND HE IS SHOOKETH SHE THINKS HE HATES HER. WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME? T_T ofcourse he can't truly hate the one person he truly loves..and there's that question again.. they're so close but it can't be this easy can it. (You: ofcourse not) GOSH THE ANGST. How he slips up because I'm sure he wants to say 2493753049 things he's just not sure what to say first or what would actually convey what he feels. Why are they like this? THE WAY HE STOPS THE ELEVATOR. WITH THAT LINE. PHEW. [random but imagine she was in the elevator down when the power went out, he'd go insane] .. ok back to him telling her he's IN LOVE WITH HER. i don't know if I'll survive if one or both of them says this on the show, but they deserve to hear it so much. and they really don't waste any second do they. RIGHT IN THE ELEVATOR. (random but i was so scared the elevator would drop) That was so hot. and he wants to take her to bed *cries in darvey* HE WANTS TO CARRY HER ON HIS BACK. I'm... the talk about his back hurting, that's so them. gosh they're back to the banter it's so good.

I literally have no words... that's how much I loved it. But I'm gonna try anyway: the way you described their dynamics all the way from the angst beginning over their flirtatious banter to the very ending full of love and passion was just BEAUTIFUL... INCREDIBLE... FLAWLESS... you dragged me into this story and captured in a very very happy place, so please you have to keep on writing! That's the only way I can imagine myself survive until march 28... 3

yeah... i am dead. the end.