Actually it’s perfect. I like what you did. Keep us the good work

All I have to say about this is that it's hilarious that you decided to call the mum Hopeless Helen (it's funny bc it's true lol) (also I think her name is Susan)

Cool.

Hopeless Helen... Gosh, I know that's not her real name, but it actually suits her. And while I normally hate Peter, I felt sorry for him in this fanfic. "Helen" is quick to blame Henry when something bad happens and she obviously prefers Peter, but that means added pressure for Peter. He HAS to be perfect, he HAS to be good all the time and the minute he does ONE bad thing, his parents get overly shocked, whereas it's normal for children to not be always so good (though his constant snitching on Henry isn't what I'd call good behaviour - but I digress).
Anyway, I liked this. Maybe I'm too old for Horrid Henry, but I was watching it with my little cousins a good many months ago and actually ended up liking it more than I thought I would. I found this by chance, and I'm happy I did.

I have no idea what this series is but I love reading your stories regardless. Keep up the great work.