| Reviews for Picture This |
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Child-of-Hermes245 chapter 1 . 6/28 Lovely! Astounding! Everything we could ask for! Great job! Have a nice day! |
kuchee chapter 1 . 10/26/2019 Lovely! You did an amazing job contrasting the earlier portraits with the later ones. The banter between friends really made me smile (the gait of a baby turtleduck lol), and the oppressive feelings and the way Zuko nitpicks the earlier portraits is great, as well as the detail about Azula's portrait watching him. Lots of lovely little details in each scene that feel so in-character I can almost see them. One thing though, watch out to make sure your use of present tense is consistent. Definitely a headcanon-worthy piece :) Thank you! |
Nock and Bolt chapter 1 . 7/22/2018 This was freaking beautiful. I decided I loved it the moment you started describing the portrait taking for the “Old Friends” poster, and the ones after that were just perfect (the ones before, of course, providing relevant contrast). Really good job on a unique little one shot. |
StrawberryKris chapter 1 . 4/2/2018 This was beautiful. I loved it. Thank you for sharing this! |
Blouta chapter 1 . 3/25/2018 Beautifully written. I love that you included the two portraits from the series and filled in the blanks |
Boogum chapter 1 . 3/22/2018 This was lovely! Can't believe I hadn't read it before. |
Anon195 chapter 1 . 3/19/2018 Beautiful... just beautiful! |
Fairy of the Friz chapter 1 . 2/12/2018 Beautiful! Absolutely loved the progression through the storyline, and especially the ending XD |
patronus1234 chapter 1 . 2/8/2018 Great story. |
luciangirl06 chapter 1 . 2/6/2018 This is beautiful! I think that you could still make the atmosphere tenser and Zuko more uncertain with the family portrait they had to take with Zuko's scar. You could also make the absence of his mother more prominent or perhaps make her presence bigger in the very first part of your story just to make more of an impact. But honestly, this story is already great as it is. |
CrackedShot chapter 1 . 2/5/2018 outstanding work! Stories like these are the reason I never get any writing done, and that is a compliment. |