Well this is fun

Well, that was better as even by knowing canon, we never knew what was happening except for the big end picture.
A little sad about her appearance so soon, its hard to find fics with strong heroines where they can sometimes take major roles instead of sidekicks, filler, damsels in need of rescue, one chapter harem members, or all that ...

And suddenly he became an idiot AND an observer(instead of watching behind a screen he is in live but as an "observer"). There are many ways to make events happen, like knowing Vegeta would want to know what happen to Raditz after being KIA for some time(not enough saiyans to govern around, as less than 2 digits lives) and Raditz knowing this would tell them about a great danger coming so Kami tells Goku where he can go train instead of dying like that.

Btw, I cringe really bad at the start with that song/intro... Uugh.

Looks promising and I like his behavior and plans, like going just to find amusement and maybe some chaos as well.

loving so, keep at it

Honestly a bit disappointed "The Universe" is not only making some things remain the same, but having Raditz forget details of the plot? Kind of makes it just regular canon plus Raditz.
And about Andriod 21, sort of sucks she doesn't have Piccolo's DNA for his regeneration like Cell. But it's probably for the better if she has children with a certain someone. Being a hybrid Saiyan should grant her huge potential to maybe even be the strongest in the team, right? Oh well, hopefully we see that future knowledge change it up when you feel like updating again.

Very good story

Smart thinking there! Although i was suprised you didnt have the group use the time chamber atleast for 2 or 3 extra months of training, because if you arent cheating your not trying lol. Please continie and id loveto see Ssj4 being used as it my fav transformation! maybe after or by the end of the Buu saga but before Beerus comes would be a good time? Anyway keep um coming!

Hey, I'm just glad you haven't given up on this story. Take your time with this, and I will look forward to the next chapter, whenever it may arrive.

Best of luck, Swift!

I like how kind raditz is to gohan. i wonder how he will change the plot. I like that he already saved yamcha

Awesome

Super

Nice

Woah me! I thought this story was over. Glad I was wrong, and my patience was rewarded. Clearly, it's a trend for readers to pressure writers to update a story ASAP these days. Can't be helped. Don't blame you for being petty. Jinkouman? Zoinks! I was only expecting Saibamen, not a character from the DB games.

Keep it up I love this story please.