I like your story. It's not often you see loving poly relationships, and especially done this well.

Another aspect I love is submissive Pyrrha. She is a certified badass, a powerful Huntress, and an obedient cockslave and sexual pet. Well done, and thank you for the story.

Great work, you should definitely try this style again.

Explicit sexual content isn't allowed on this website, check the community guidelines. I'd recommended you repost this to Ao3 or something before it gets removed.

Dang. That was Awsome. Yah somehow managed to put some heart into this am smut. Couldn't stop reading.

*Kisses my fingertips like a chef tasting a good meal* This is molto bene signore! The next one is sure to be perfecto, with a virtuoso like you orchestrating the story .

This story is great so far. Hoping to see another chapter soon

Nice explanation for why Pyrrha is their pet.

I enjoyed the edging but I also love seeing edging used as an almost brutal torture. I would love to see it be used again!

more jaune and nora

Really like it. Can’t wait to see Jaune fuck Pyrrha nice and hard.

Never read a story in this sort of vein with Jaune and Nora doming Pyrrha, looking forward to more. The chapter you have planned out sound good to me, naybe do one where Pyrrha or Nora (or both) are pregnant?

I know I would love to see those two chapters. Especially the prequel. I'm certain many of your readers are wondering how and why Pyrrha agreed to being both Jaune AND Nora's pet.

Great chapter I am currently enjoying this fic. Truly looking forward to more.

This history is make for azuregigacyber

Ahh finally the long wait is done and yet...more waiting but still greatly "enjoyed" this chapter and waiting (again) for more