Review got cut off at the end, so I just want to say that I am certainly interested in seeing what else Yubel being a part of Jaden and Alexis's sex life will do in the future. After seeing them be more rough with the other while being possessed I think that they will bw more open to trying things out that they normally wouldn't, like oral or maybe even anal. But that's just speculation on my part.

With all the praise I've given this story I have one thing that really bothers me. I kinda feel bad mentioning it since it is such a minor thing, but it kinda bugs me whenever I come back to this story and I hope that you could do something about it.

You see, before Jaden and Alexis have sex you clearly mention when she takes her shirt off, revealing her bare breasts but you never mention her taking off any other article of clothing before they start having sex. Everytime I get to this part it kinda throws off my immersion in the story and I hope that you could maybe do something about it if you can.

This is easily one of the best things you've ever written hands down. The sheer amount of times I have come back to reread this are many and I finally decided to give you my thoughts on this since I feel like I can convey all I want to say about this one shot.
First of all, the best thing to come out of this was the chance to finally get Yubel and Alexis to become close after getting fused together thanks to Super Polymerization. Also can I say that getting them fused like that was brilliant on your since Yubel is a big part of Jaden's world getting her to be part of Alexis was certainly a big first step into getting Alexis into Jaden's world.
Now this is the chance for Alexis to really see what it was she got herself into and it certainly is a rought start since she was rather overwhelmed thanks to learning that Banner is still around as a spirit and then seeing Neos and the Neo Spacians appear in a short time.

I think that you did a good job at giving Alexis a reasonable reaction to seeing Winged Kuriboh and Banner, but I think having the Neos Spacians show up was a tad too much since their appearance only felt like it happened to just shock Alexis.
I know Neos said that they wanted to go over strategies for the upcoming tournament, but considering how this is the first time they've done something like this, it felt like it came out of nowhere. Maybe if you had them do something like this at an earlier story, this wouldn't bother me as much. Granted this is a nitpick and not really something that diminishes my enjoyment by any means, but I still felt like I needed to comment on it.

Now the most important part comes from the meeting Alexis and Yubel have when Alexis accidentally wonders in to the Yubel's mindroom. By the way that was an interesting method since the whole room of the mind thing is something that was only a thing in the original series, so kudos for bringing that back for this purpose, doubly so since it is the best possible method for Yubel and Alexis to have their one on one talk.
And that was without a doubt the best thing to come out of this story for things moving forward since not only does this allow Alexis and Yubel a chance to really get to know one another and really become close. Getting Yubel to share her suspicions that Viper was involved in the events that transpired in VR Duelists was nice to see, but what really is the highlight comes from Yubel revealing that she is attracted to Alexis since the erotic selfie she sent Jaden has been in Yubel's mind all this time.
I wonder if you'll ever reveal why Yubel is attracted to Alexis, but it doesn't really matter since the reasons Yubel gives for why that may be the case are good enough.
Of course, the conversation was going to go to sex eventually since Jaden and Alexis are at that level with each other and it is a valid point for Alexis to question Yubel on if she can feel it. And this leads to the main event of the chapter, Yubel having a sort of threesome with Jaden and Alexis after revealing that she can 'inhabit' them while they're getting it on and Alexis tells her she's open to trying that experience. The sex scene that follows has to be one of the best and most original sex scenes I've ever read.
Seeing how Yubel inhabiting them changes how one of them approach sex was well done. I especially liked how the one being inhabited is rougher with the one who isn't; this method of giving pain and pleasure certainly fits Yubel and you certainly did a good job here.
Not gonna lie, them getting a room full of mirrors felt a bit convoluted, but this is something that I can overlook since I like the fact that they're used to show Yubel take the place of the reflection of the one she's inhabiting. So yeah, the mirrors felt a bit heavy handed but after seeing why you have them there I can't complain. Especially since the part where Alexis looks at the mirrors and sees Yubel plowing into her are some of my favorite parts of this story.
After this is said and done having Yubel and Alexis have one last talk in the mindroom was a nice touch. Here they not only share their enjoyment of the experience but after Yubel assumes that this is a one-time thing, Alexis tells her that while she's not sure that this will become a regular thing, she is open to to try this again sometime. And of course ending things with Yubel and Alexis becoming friends was the perfect way to end this chapter.
Not gonna lie, I think Yubel's line about Alexis being a kinkier girl than she thought was actually the best line in this story without a doubt. I really can't give you enough credit for how you explored Alexis's character in this one chapter since not only did you have her react to the unnatural events that she's now a part of, but you also showed her more sexual side as well.
Whether it be the erotic selfie, willing to have Yubel join in while she and Jaden are having sex, or willing to try it again some other time; I really enjoyed how you handled this part

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A great and very hot one-shot here!

I look forward to reading it. Also hope we get to see Chazz and Syrus at some point in one of your stories.

Thanks again for letting me know of this one-shot.

So no time passed since Jaden dueling the virtual copy of him during VR Duelist and yes Jaden, good using your head to let Alexis know what's been going on... more so then you think hehe.

PFF... Jaden would nosebleed FOR SURE!

HAHAHAHA... The Anime really missed up not doing what you're doing. I mean imagine Alexis OR anyone who didn't have the ability to see ghosts or spirits or Duel Monster spirits to see them now. OH BOY. Hahaha! That's Alexis's little panic attack. And she thought Jaden was weird back then, he's more sane than anyone to have THESE MANY spirits around him. Luna/Ruka only had a handful but Jaden has THIS MANY.

Oh look, a Soul Door connection Yugi and Atem have is what Alexis and Yubel have... hmm... I wonder what Jaden's room looks like? Probably a room of his cards, LIKE EVERY card he's used or had in his lifetime and photos of all of his duels.

Anyway the two have a chat of certain things, now viewing this oneshot as a necessary good because we need this time for the two of them to bond over.

HAHA! GHOST SEX! Better than the movie Ghost, like a hundred times! How can you say this weird. Yubel is... he... she... she to be safe, she gets her needs. Who wouldn't? So... haha... this was fun, super. I'm happy, like a lot.

Well I'll be looking forward to the next part of Jaden's journey then. Leave me posted. I am curious... with all these tournaments and new adventures Jaden has gone through; would all of this lead him into dueling Yugi of the current timeline? I'm not sure, just asking.

I look forward to seeing Alexis again in Viper's Grudge. I really hope that if she duels in the next installment she holds her own a lot better than she did in ritual of doom. A lot of people find it annoying that she started of as a strong and formidable duelist but ended up taking backseat.

Loved the fanfic man that was steamy did not expect Yubel to be thrown into the mix but I liked it

and i loved Alexis reaction to all the spirits

can't wait for Viper's Grudge

Wow! That sex scene was brilliant and...difference, and yet I enjoyed that story. Can't wait for Viper's Grudge.

That is one of the most interesting one shot stories I have ever read