This is godly! Please, please, please keep writing! If you maybe want to re-visit it anytime soon — I won’t be one to stop you.
I really enjoyed it. The storyline is really interesting and I’d love to read the rest.
The writing is very enjoyable.
-Julia

I really hope this has a happy ending. Don’t get me wrong I love angst. It’s my favorite kind of build up in a story. I don’t review much (bad habit, I know), but I really want to read more of this. Please continue I love your writing!

Expand please!

it would be fine... if I didn't have to struggle to read it through all the code. I might have missed some parts but I did persevere through it. If you could fix it that would be great.

I really would like you to write more! This was great though.

You’re bloody right you made people mad. Continue! Please.. You can’t end like this, it’s not fair to anyone and especially not to the characters. Just imagine it: leaving them in an eternal state of unhappiness. Please, please tell me you have plans to continue this. If not you’ll probably break a lot of hearts cause this story has so much potential, but it’s just gonna say being potential unless you wriiiiite. So pls.

Omg. please don't leave it like this

Please make it right. I'd rather they both hated each other or loved each other than this.

Why is this only one chapter? Finish this please! I like it!

Didn't you say this was complete? that's no way to end a story, so you'll just have to try again. Otherwise this was great

Oh gosh! Please do continue!

Please continue this story!

Please continue this!

Keep going!

what?! that's not it is it?