the story itself is interesting but the ending is too rushed so i cant enjoy it

Thank you i love it...so much...i was waiting for this story to Complete for so long...its worth it ..

This was so good! I binge read the whole story today

XD they had sex everywhere! Naruto took such good care of Sasuke during his rut~ Sasuke finally proposed to Naruto yay! (I dedicate the song 'Dangerously in love' by Beyonce to this lovely chapter..) I'm so relieved Sasuke left the company and the wedding was amazing, Naruto was such a beautiful bride~ XD Is it just me or does it seem like Haku is always constantly pregnant? Itachi really is getting to work every chance he gets~ Damn Naru and Sasu went to Italy (they fucked for three days straight and spent time together,), and Paris (they got to see all over Paris and then shared Naruto's heat together!) for their honeymoon how fun! Naruto's heat was so intense, I feel bed for the omega...but Sasuke took great care of him~ I'm happy Itachi and Sasuke started their own business this means they are making money and still very famous! Awe how cute Sakura and Kiba ended up together 3..Naruto and Soren's relationships is still so cute!.HOLYFUCK NARUTO IS PREGNANT! I understand why Naruto couldn't get pregnant now, but damn Naruto's mother was horrible..yes she was sixteen but it's still sad she constantly tried to abort him, no wonder he came out so malnourished...and then she wouldn't even look at him...at least Jiraiya was there for Naruto...I'M SO HAPPY FOR NARUTO HE FINALLY HAD A BABY OF HIS OWN, SOUTA!

...Country boy alpha Kiba (who apparently knows Naruto really well and even dated Naruto..) has a potential deal with Fugaku? wtf is going on? Is this about Naruto's past? I'm so hyped! Okay so Naruto's mom is American and he was poor...I hate Fugakufor messing with Naruto's past...XDAlpha are fawning over Naruto and it's making Sasuke jealous, he doesn't even want Naruto to wear tight pants! Awee Soren is so cute, I love the relationship between Naruto and Soren so much 3...Sasuke and Naruto hadn't even had sex yet and Sasuke is already super ready to get Naruto pregnant, he has the strong desire to get Naruto pregnant...I hope to god Naruto gets pregnant with a sweet baby boy, perhaps with Naruto's eyes...Sasuke's hair...he would be so cute with soft pale Uchiha skin 3...(btw I dedicate the song 'All I want is you' by Miguel to this amazing bookI FUCKING HATE FUGAKU HE HAS NO RIGHT TO DIG INTO NARUTO'S MOST VULNERABLE PARTS...the agony and loss Naruto cried out when Fugaku told Sasuke about his inability to get pregnant broke my heart and made me cry...the poor sweetheart...(I love Kiba for being smart and admitting the truth, he messed up and that's rhat, Sakura needs to let Sasuke go and Kiba needs to let Naruto go, it's for the best...) I feel bad for Kiba, Naruto was his first love...they were first loves...but then Kiba broke Naruto's heart, but Kiba needs to let him go, maybe apologize and become friends but that's about it...I hope Kiba and Sakura end up together...they need eachother...I love hie Sasuke comforted Naruto about everything and then he went into rut and let his alpha fuck Naruto...the sex was so passionate and beautiful...I'm so happy they finally had sex...I wonder what its gonna be like when Naruto is in his heat...Ughh when Sasuke fucked Naruto on the kitchen counter obviously wanting to get the omega pregnant it was so sweet and sexy all at once~ and then they were on the couch Sasuke's c*ck so deep it hit the omega's womb and Naruto started to ride Sasuke...oh f*ck that was so sexy.. I love how much they knotted especially and of course Sasuke came inside Naruto without a care! NARUTO NEEDS TO HAVE A BABY BOY OF HIS OWN! OR BETTER YET TWIN BABIES A BOY AND A GIRL!

The way Haku and Itachi met was so cute and just so perfect...they caught eachother sights and Haku fell in Itachi's lap...so cute! No wonder Haku is so beautiful, I mix of japenese and russian (I'm russian!) Haku is gorgeous! It's so cure how obsessed Itachi is with Haku~ I love how feisty Haku is, I love the way he threatened and shouted at the alpha and beta girls to get away from Itachi! Haku and Itachi fell in love at first sight, how sweet 3... (I love Kisame he's so sweet...Kisame deserves someone too) Its amazing how much Haku and Itachi are obsessed and in love with eachorher! I love how Haku spoke russian to Itachi, he should speak it more during sex~ Wow Itachi and Haku went all know, sharing heats and ruts, knotting, having a baby...I love it! It's so sad that Itachi and Haku went through so much because of fucking Fugaku! I know Mikoto didn't do anything in the past but I'm so proud of her for finally doing something now...and the hug between her and Itachi had me in tears...I'm curious what Naruto went through before he met Sasuke, where are Naruto's parents, does Naruto have any siblings? How did Naruto find out he couldn't have children?

That was an amazing story. Great job on it. Can’t wait to read the sequel

Ahhhhhhhhh! So cute! This story had such a beautiful ending!

I'm so happy! And so sad but that happy sad. Everything ended beautifully and I'll be sure to read the sequel but first have to send my regards to the lovely author who didn't give up, yes you had help but it all stems back to you to sit down and type. Thank you for not abandoning, forgetting, or falling out of love with this story you are truly appreciated. Woll be reading on!

~kai

Oh my god...oh my goodness33333 the ending of this story was better then I could ever hope for..it was beautiful..wonderful...tired up loose ends..EVERYTHING.I Love the story and you(Not in a creepy way tho,lol) I was waiting for this chapter and you didn't disappoint at all...you just made an amazing story perfect: D Great work hun. Thanks for the great read. I enjoyed every second of it.

Lol the Sasunaru Gods have heard my prayers. *bow* Thank you devine author for such and amazing story.

The peanut has arrived!

Wait for the last chapter.

I can't stop tears of joy out of my eyes! Its soooooo HAPPY ENDING I LOVE IT

Oh My God, this was so beautiful! I loved Soren's proposal, it was the perfect timing. Exactly what Naruto needed to hear. And Sasuke's decision to leave his father's business was long overdue, really. But it also proved to Naruto how much he means to Sasuke. Way to go to Mokoto, that was so fucking brave after how long she had hidden who she really was and then leaving her husband as well. Good for her. Naruto's pregnancy was perfect! I love how you described/ explained what happened that allowed him to become pregnant. Sounds like a fairy tale! Only true love's kiss (or claim mark) can break the curse! So beautiful! Loved this so much! Thank you so much for the story!