Hi! I just wanna say thank you! for writing Entwined! Druna fics are so rare and so is the style you've written it in. That was the first fic I read where teen Draco smokes (which I find alluring). I'm not really good with words but I really really want to thank you! It got me through my sleep-deprived over-caffeinated anxious self at 4AM trying to distract my mind off of my morning exams!

WOW That was the most intense first chapter I've read in a while. I was literally on my toes especially at the end.

Lovely story! There's a shortage of good, long, well written Draco/Luna out there, and I really enjoyed reading your story. Hope you are doing well, and that you're one day able to finish it. Thank you for sharing your writing.

For godness sake, this story is way addicted and I'm not even lying. The plot was absolutely smooth and I love the way you made this story was so alive yet so detail. Wow. I'm really looking forward into next chapter. Hope that I can get notification of your story update sooner!

please update again
thanks

Very good story so far. I've really enjoyed reading it.

Keep up the good work!

Draco casts Stupefy at Mulciber and he reacts as though he were hit with Petrificus Totalus; possible slip-up there.

Wow! Huge revelations here about Theo, Narcissa, AND Dean. The story's world, so far confined to Grimmauld Place along with Draco's POV, is growing wider. I'm not terribly fond of Dean and his tarantula and his oddball sense of humour, but I can understand what went on with him and Luna under the circumstances. It says a lot about Draco and Luna's relationship that they can be so honest with each other. I greatly enjoyed this chapter.

I'm so glad you've updated!

Warning: The following will be my incoherent thoughts while reading this.

Yesss! Draco's smoking again! Thanks to you, Draco smoking is my new kink.
I love how you always make him contemplate about his past and how everything that's going on seems to just go against everything Draco was raised to believe and yet when Draco does question why he's doing all of these, it always comes down to one thing: Luna.
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"He's been complaining and whining to Luna endlessly..." OKAY, I COULD SO TOTALLY IMAGINE THAT. And Luna's reaction would just be a gentle smile, a reassuring touch, and even a comforting joke.

I wish there were more interactions between Draco and the Golden Trio, instead of you just mentioning it.

I do admire how you write that out of all intentions, Draco's main concern is always Luna. To be honest, it could be a bit much at times, but I do realize that circumstances do call for such a need. After everything Draco's been through, finding, getting to know and falling in love with Luna is the most stable thing Draco has. (I'm not sure if that makes sense.)
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"I just... needed some fresh air."

"...You could've just gone into the backyard."

I think he still prefers the nook because aside from the privacy it gave, it almost makes him feel safe, and again, connecting more memories he shared with Luna in that nook.

"You'll have to cut back when we're traveling you know... How are you supposed to keep up with me if your lungs are full of ash?"

Oh my god, I love your Luna! I love how certain she is with herself, with her choices, with Draco. GAHD!
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Thank you for showing just what a scared boy Draco is because, at the end of the day, everyone is just frightened by what's happening around them. And the fact still remains, the majority of them were all just children whose childhood was taken way too early.

Once again, Luna is so firm in her decision and her beliefs. I have no doubt in my mind that Luna does not for once second believe that everything will not turn out right, her bright optimism is the perfect balance to Draco's nerves.
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Oohhh, I love your description of Diagon Alley.

The fight between Draco and Dolohov and Mulciber was so intense! I loved it! COME THROUGH ORDER TRAINING!

Oh my gods, THEO! I have a soft spot for Theodore Nott.

THEO'S THE SPY OH MY! I honestly thought it would be Blaise!
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Oh, my own heart. Narcissa. I'm a bit incoherent right now (isn't this whole review, incoherent?) But just, the thought of what Rabastan would do with her just doesn't sit well in my stomach, makes me uncomfortable.

Poor Draco. YOU HAVE MY HEART NOW! ARE YOU HAPPY?

"I need to get back," both Draco and Theo said at once.

THANK YOU FOR THAT SMALL SOMEWHAT CUTE MOMENT. It was needed after all the tension. And, did I mention I love Theo?
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The confrontation scene was so well written.
The anger Draco felt after the Order made him believe that his mother was dead, and Remus explaining things. Yes, I agree with Remus, if they told him immediately without confirmation then it turned out to be false, that would break Draco's heart even more.

Draco crying while Remus hugged him was just too much, babe! Too much! Oh, my own heart!
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I honestly can't wait for Narcissa to meet Luna. Although I can't guess on how you might characterize her, maybe she'll be stuffy in regards to Luna's... eccentrics or just welcome her with open arms after seeing how much she had helped and been with Draco all this time.

Ooooohhhhhh, jealous Draco! It's another one of my kinks.

"I can't believe you just told me you fancied my childhood friend while you're lying naked in bed with me."

That's it. That's the best line in this whole chapter.
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I really like Pansy. I wish there were more stories about Pansy and Draco because it would be such an interesting thing to explore especially with their past and their families pure-blood beliefs. Like, were they betrothed since childhood? Did they just started dating when in school? Did their families instantly approve? It's an array of possibilities!

"I wasn't exactly always a good boyfriend."
Honestly, with any other character, that's like opening Pandora's box, but with Luna, nope. She trusts and knows that Draco isn't who he was in the past and he could easily be a good boyfriend. (If he isn't one already and honestly, I think he is!)

"Dean Thomas. Dean fucking Thomas... He wanted to shout. He wanted to run downstairs, demand Moody to tell him where Thomas was, hunt him down, and hex him."

Once again, I love how irrational he can be when jealous but instantly simmer down with just Luna's touch.

Again, my own heart beats for Luna. I've read a few stories detailing Luna's time at Malfoy Manor but I really do like your brief description of it. Not much detail but with how you describe Luna as she was saying it, was still powerful.
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"I don't think so. At least not in a real and healthy way. He was...comfort. A friend but... also a means of survival."

LUNA MY ANGEL. I like how you subtle distinguished between how Luna feels for Draco and Dean. She didn't say it but the implication that her love for Draco is real and healthy. You're brilliant!

"Luna looked down at his chest, her fingers twiddling against his skin. 'This doesn't change anything, right?'

Draco's lip quipped and he leaned forward to press a kiss to her forehead. 'It changes nothing.'"

OKAY, YOU WIN. YOU HAVE MY SOUL!
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And that concludes my incoherent and jumbled up thoughts on this amazing chapter!

Also, yes yes yes! I would love to read a short about Luna and Dean!

I can't wait for your next update!

Hello author, i'm new reader. I read this story in one day until this chapter, and i absolutely love this story!
When snape appear in the story? And blaise, i thought he's the spy!
Please update soon!

I'm burning with anticipation for the next chapter. xD This story has developed really nicely, and I want to see how Draco will get on with the Golden Trio now that they're on the same side!

I loved this story and look forwards to many more of your writing

Ahhh this got to be my favourite chapter so far, so heartwarming :') kudos! Thank you for writing heheh

Wonder what luna did that made her say the order underestimated her ;)

Man is there any way to remove that mark

Yasss they met!