Reviews for Another Strand In The Great Web
Ranmoon Man chapter 44 . 7/16
In this Chapter, many things happen:

First Avengers try to contain one evil group, The Blue Orb Squad (¡Really evil, they are evil versions of heroes we know, and also with more power than the ones we know!), failing on it. (One question, Who is MODAK?).
It seems that this Group is after Jessica Drew and Miles Morales.

When Blue Orb Squad appears at Baxter Building, they fight against Fantastic Four, and although they were wining easily, between Sue (who contents the Villains in one of her Force Fields), and Reed who uses one of his inventions, the villains are send to their Dimension.

In the Last Chapter we had seen Kaine injured and being carried to Peter and MJ House by Aracely.
April, May and Aracely were concerned by him. (Peter and Aunt May try to encourage them).
Cindy speaks TOO MUCH, in my humble opinion. (Asking Aracely if she and Kaine have
had Sex).
Although he isnt the only one offended or the only one that Says something to her, When Ben listened to her, he is angry and criticized Cindy.
Ben and Cindy after that begin a discussion. THESE TWO, WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO THEM?.
Miguel and Anya had a Good idea taking April and May out of there.

After that discussion we see that Aracely was under Stress. (¡Very good, Ben and Cindy!).

And just after Mary Jane Says: "it could have gone worse", appears Jessica Drew (who continues calling Peter COWARD), Miles Morales and the Fantastic Four (¡ Parker Luck !).

It doesnt surprise me that Mary Jane Gets Angry. and then Jessica says that "this doesnt involve you" speaking to her. Mary Jane answers her that if she insults her husband it clearly involves her. (Jessica, You have made a Great Mistake).

Reed and Jessica explain what has happened in the Baxter Building. Aunt May thinks that the Blue orb Squad could be the ones that attacked Aracely and Kaine.

Peter thinks that what happened in his Birthday isnt Nothing compared to what is going to happen, and better compare what happened between Aracely, Kaine and Jessica, Miles and Fantastic Four (and although he doesnt know by the moment, he also could compare with Avengers).

Aracely and Kaine have one interesting conversation (Aracely says him that she loves him,
but Kaine answer that she deserves someone better than him). He doesnt seem happy at knowing they are at Peter and MJ house.

I am afraid of Spider Reaper (One Question, during "Shattered dimensions", Peter and MJ didnt find one Spider Reaper?).

What is going to happen to everything that was inside the Bubble?.

Another question: Morlun and his Family are going to appear in this Spider-Verse?
Zarius chapter 44 . 7/16
I think you could polish up a bit of the dialouge, for example MJ saying "you barraging into my home and InsulTING my husband makes it my business" rather than just "insult"
Rivet94 chapter 44 . 7/8
sorry to say but i didn't like this chapter , it was fine in general, but I think have issues with the arc itself , compared to other remade arcs, i feel it drags a little too much and the villain is a bit too edgy . I get the shattered grid reference but I just...don't know . the writing itself is still great though I am iffy on both the aracely/ Kaine thing, because of the age gap, and the Ben/ Cindy situation which is still questionable since you kept the hormone drive. I still love this fic but I have to point these stuff out
tl34lt12 chapter 44 . 7/8
1: Glad you are back at this

2: I may need a quick recap reading first to get the context of this arc again.

3:So another evil squad is here, well that is interesting and brutal
Death Fury chapter 44 . 7/8
good chapter
Jokermask18 chapter 44 . 7/7
Another good chapter! The things said about the Blue Orb squad's respectives worlds intrigue me.
ConlonKeith chapter 2 . 6/10
Thanks also wouldn't it be interesting if Leverage International, the decendants of the original Leverage Incorporated, and the original members of Leverage Incorporated could assist Spiderman 2099 and the original Spiderman in taking down Alchemax when it is first starting in the present and gradually in the future during its development and even further in the future by the year 2099.
ConlonKeith chapter 8 . 5/18
Could you consider doing a version year 2099 of Spiderman 2099 where Peter Parker, Mary Jane Watson Parker, and their children are still alive in the year 2099 rather than just Peter Parker being still alive.
MayoTango131 chapter 43 . 5/3
Poor Cindy Moon, I never thought I would put those three words together but you accomplished the impossible that I felt sorry for Dan Slott's most irritating character that I even forgot that she was naked all the time. His almost childish dialogue reminded me of BioShock's Little Sisters, which makes me wonder how damaged his mind is after 15 years of confinement and how he will react upon discovering that he is 30 years old, a big difference with his comic counterpart that was a cocky spoiled brat who complained about everything. And even though she ruined Ben Reilly's life, it was not for malice and she regrets it unlike the original Cindy who would have said "My date rape sense is tingling". BTW, nice touch to "The Evil that Men Do" as Felicia was clearly upset when asking Cindy if she "raped" Ben. The sad thing is that, although she can't control him with her pheromones, Cindy will later try to seduce Peter not because she wants to but to fulfill her duty as "The Bride".
It's me or the Spider-Reaper scene is heavily inspired by the Power Rangers: Shattered Grid Live-Action Trailer. The villain sitting on a throne, surrounded by adept soldiers who are parallel versions of familiar characters. The Blue Orb Squad will be a great challenge since Kaine and Hummingbird barely managed to escape alive.
Ranmoon Man chapter 43 . 4/25
Reading about Cindy and Ben, i have remembered that in one previous chapter something happens, a bit strange in my humble opinion:

* In Chapter 26, Spiderman and Spinneret are in a Alternative Universe, and there
SPIDERGIRL SOLFERINO(April) and SPIDERGIRL AZURE(May) say on the one hand CINDY and BEN were Married (Ben died defending his nieces) and on the other side ARACELY and KAINE are Married.

There appears a character from RYV, Annie Parker/Spiderling and also speak about someone called Benjy.
Is Mary Jane Pregnant of Benjy and Annie?.

This would be a Alternative Reality, but I think the Future of the principal story will be similar to it.

* Also in Chapter 25, There Something bad happens to Wes. What happened to him and
Will something like that happen to Wes in the principal story?.

*Also, Why Normie has the Simbionte in that Chapter?.

Now, Lets go with Chapter 43:

* About Philip Watson, I think that in his Human Blood System there is more alcohol than blood.

* Poor Mail Box, apart of the other things that "alcoholic man" has destroyed.

*Jennifer has been VERY, VERY WELL WHEN SHE SAID "Are you a buffon or just a drunk". But...When she saw Ben with Cindy, She said him that they are finished and don't ever call her.

*What will happen with Jennifer?. Will she have another Boyfriend?. (I dont know, but one thing that I am almost Sure is that She wont return with Wyatt Wingfott).

*And changing point of view, Ben isnt the only one attracted to Cindy due to her Power, Miguel is also attracted.

*When Cindy turns off her "Seduction ability":

- Miguel Feels he can think clearly now.

- Ben is angry, because he feels he has been a slave to Cindy.

* When Cindy and Peter can Speak Later (He is immune to her "Seduction ability", only giving him a headache) She Could tell him all she knows about EZEKIEL SIMMS.

* Miles Morales and Jessica Drew call Peter a COWARD, and say that he is nothing like Ultimate Universe Peter (They know that the Peter they knew was Spiderman?).
THEY SHOULD SEE HIM IN ACTION AS SPIDERMAN.

* Blue HULK?.

* GENERAL STACY?. (This is related to SPIDERVERSE, RIGHT?).

* And now appear ARACELY & KAINE.

* In the next Chapter, Surely we will see about what is happening in Houston.

* About the SPIDERVERSE, Be quiet and Dont Hurry with NEXT CHAPTERS.
Death Fury chapter 43 . 4/21
nice
Jokermask18 chapter 43 . 4/21
Nice! What can you tell me about the members of the Blue Orb Squad?
tl34lt12 chapter 43 . 4/21
And Now Shit is going hit the Fan

Of Course Ben would be very mad for non consent sex and being mind controlled (even harsher cause I have a personal theory that Jackat bad touched him in the comics)

Evil Trio of Reaper, Gwen and Harry, did not expect that.

Did not expect Reaper having control over alternate meta humans either.

Hope Cindy would get adjusted and teaches soon, you really did remind of her initially Spider Sue Bimbo first appearance.

Though the fact she technically naked in a silk suit most of the time at the start was and still is sexy (I am still guy after all).
Rivet94 chapter 43 . 4/21
man the crazyness is piling for the spider-fam and Ben's reaction is just fair, still a great chapter
Guest chapter 42 . 4/20
So glad to see that you're back. I've definitely missed this story in my life, especially with all the craziness going on in the world now. Out of curiosity, have you read the new Spidey series by JJ Abrams and his son? If so, what are your unfiltered thoughts on it?
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