I love it! you should continue the story, it's so good!

LOOOOOOVE THIS! I wish this was canon. Thank you!

They're so cute :) I feel like you did a good job of portraying how awkward, yet excited they would both feel to be in the same room after that kiss.

This was unbelievably adorable, and I loved that it was from Rory's point of view, especially since we get a feel for Jess' take on things with his conversation with Luke in chapter 18 of TCW. I'm so glad you're adding more to this universe, especially after being away from this story for so long. I'd love to see what happens next. Any chance this could be a two parter?

I agree with the last review. I’m enjoying these little side stories to the main story (and the main story is great too). Looking forward to more of both soon please!

Oh, come on! You can't just leave it there! Especially after reading the phone conversation between Jess and Luke. I demand to know what happens next! (By the way, I really like your story, in case you couldn't tell... ;-) )