| Reviews for Phosphorus |
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FireDragon1619 chapter 7 . 2/15 Hi i was reading and keeping an eye one your stories since you wrote Chance Encounters and this story from the moment you upload it but i didn't had a fanfiction acc until now. I wanted to let you know that you are my favorite author, you have amazing ideas, i love your stories especially the ones with Ryuga and Yu. Also this story is amazing its so unique no one has ever wrote a story about Ryuga and Tithi and the moment they found Yu just killed me. You made great work with the characters and they personalities too. They look the same with the anime ones and thats so satisfying it make me feel that this should have been confirm. Take your time in real life but please conticue |
Guest chapter 7 . 2/11 I really love your story it's my new favorite and I already red it 1000 of times and I'm still no bored of it. No one else has ever made a story for those 2 characters and keep almost the same, their original personalities from the anime, I love it. The way you made them interact with each other and other characters such as Tsubasa and Yu is so satisfying, especially Ryuga and Yu. I always wanted their relationship to improve after metal fusion and you, you did amazing. Thank you for writing and sharing this amazing fanfic I hope you don't abandoned it. |
Guest chapter 7 . 12/27/2019 Will we see a meeting between Ryuga and Ryuto ? Maybe after he saved Tithi ? |
Guest chapter 5 . 11/28/2019 I love how Ryuga is like: “my tiny annoying thing” when Yu wants to introduce Tithi to Gingka. |
Vylarie chapter 7 . 9/29/2019 I'm really excited for the next chapter! I'm assuming that a battle between Aguma and Ryuga is coming up and it'll be cool to see them interact, considering how similar they are personality-wise. |
Vylarie chapter 5 . 9/29/2019 I've always thought it was strange how Yu and Ryuga never really interact with one another after season 1 despite their history together in the Dark Nebula, so I'm really happy to see that their relationship is more fleshed out in this story. |
GoldenDrago82 chapter 7 . 7/18/2019 Man, I'm excited for the next episode! Make it quick! |
Phoenix 7.49 chapter 7 . 6/30/2019 Doji, you just activated Ryuga's "dad mode". You done goofed up. Excellent chapter. Ryuga and L-Drago's conversations are downright captivating, as is his slowly developing bond with Tithi. Also the fact that he calls Doji a poisonous mushroom gives even more significance to the depth of his and Tithi's relationship. |
Bighead98 chapter 7 . 6/28/2019 Whelp, this is what happens when you bully a dragon. Still, its quite interesting to see when things don't go in the way of the almighty Ryuga, no? Can't wait for more! |
pentafish chapter 7 . 6/27/2019 wow, another great chapter! I loved all the characterization and l-drago being l-drago. I also really liked how Ryuga and L-Drago interacted. Also Bao. Bao is cool. There's nice humor here too lol, with Ryuga just being done with Johannes Anyway, keep up the great work! I can't wait for the next chapter :) |
resplandorrosa626 chapter 7 . 6/27/2019 This chapter is THE BEST. Ryuuga's conversation with L-Drago are always amazing to read, and the way you make him actually reflect on something without him actually wanting to is great! Also I said it before and I'll say it again: L-Drago is just perfect here, the way they react, the way they communicate with Ryuuga, their own opinions, the way they also hate Doji is just PERFECTION. I also adore Bao here, sometimes I forget how great he was in cannon but it's nice to see him around once in a while. Keep on the good work. This was definitely worth waiting for. (And yes, I read it again because you deserve all the praise and reviews in the world.) |
KYL-T7 chapter 7 . 6/27/2019 I honestly have no idea how you do it, but Ryuga manages to get more humorous with every chapter, without becoming out-of-character. (I love how he referred to Johannes as "the interruption," and his small mental comparison between Johannes/Lynx and Kyoya/Leone.) I also like how you seem to make Ryuga more relatable (ex. the fact that he likes that Tithi is so trusting of him and the things he has made to enhance their travels). It's nice to see that their bond is growing a little. L-Drago's pretty funny, too; he has a dark sense of humor, but I absolutely love it. |
Guest chapter 7 . 6/27/2019 "Fine, that poisonous mushroom." XDDDD ILY |
Guest chapter 7 . 6/27/2019 Aww Ryuga cares for tithi. And I know it is probably because he wants power but it is still adorable. And Ldrago is still awesome. His comment about snakes being too good for doji is great. He is so sassy and Ryuga and ldrago have a great relationship and I am so glad you updated. |
Guest chapter 6 . 4/11/2019 I love your beyblade fanfiction so much! |