Interesting take, I kinda liked the length. My main issue though was the Japanese words weren’t always familiar, the end seems kinda rushed with the second generation intro in the epilogue, and ... actually I think point 2 and 3 ended up getting combined as I tried to word it...

Mm... the super-long dream sequence should probably be in its own separate chapter (;
... or a separate short story, lol.

Decent story so far, but the pronouns are an issue. I understand trying to be sensitive about his gender but it really makes the descriptiveness of the story suffer. In many cases it's hard to tell the story from one involving a curseless Ranma. Even in female form Kasumi's calling him Ranma-kun rather than Ranma-chan without any prompting which only worsens the problem.
So... yeah, the mental image suffers. He was supposedly in girl-form while haunting Kasumi to do chores but without any other cues I basically just thought of guy-Ranma following her. *Really* hard to ever picture him as a girl in this fic.
And when you consider that he frequently switches to girl-form to do "girly" things, the merits of using him/he are even less.
That said, I do plan to keep reading. Even considering the story's basically just guy-ranma all the time, it's still a decent story thus far.

Yeah, this is progressing way too slowly for me. Slow boils are good but you've taken this slow boil to a level where I'm doing my best to not rip my hair out in frustration. Ranma isn't that stupid. Kasumi, Hinako, Ukyo and Shampoo are not so absent minded that when he tells them he doesn't "understand any of it", they don't get it. It's not believable.

This story is too much of a slow boil but I'm too invested in it to stop

This is one of the best ranma stories I've ever read

This was a very pleasant story and I binged it. Thank you for writing it. While I may have had a few issues overall it was a great rad!

This is obviously the greatest piece of litterature ever produced by Mankind. It's very handsome Creator should be canonised and given the title of emperor of earth as he can only lead humanity toward greatness.

Wow, what a ride, glad people are still active in the Ranma fandom even in 2018. This has to be my favorite fanfiction for this series, I binged it in 3 days! Very underated, if you ever write anything else or decide to write original stories I hope to be able to check them out.

That was pretty good, glad you were able to finish it. If its possible maybe you can write a crossover next? Haha and thx for the story.

Great job on this intereresting and unique story!

This was a good chapter, I especially liked the "Christmas Cake" reference.

Kol

Overall a good story even if I am not a fan of some chapters (the last one is far too confusing and has almost no plot).

Here are the main good and bad points of this story IMO.

GoodRefreshing to read a Ranma story after so many years where the plot and character developpement don't seems to be just a copy and paste of a previous story. Combined with a writing style good enough to not need a rewrite and it is a really good work.

BadFor me, you tried too hard. You had a lot of good ideas, but some of them could have been forgotten and in the end, the story would have been the same if not better. This Epilogue is a good example. You had an idea about the next generation, so you wrote 2 whole chapters full of character that we knew nothing about and with almost no time to enjoy who and what they are. In the end, the best part of it is the list at the end which is more an Author Note than a real part of the story.

Thank You for this story.

I enjoyed reading this "short story", but I don't know if I'd be able to handle what you would consider to be a "long story". While there were some parts I enjoyed less, I found it worthwhile to continue, and am glad that I read through to the end.
Your epilogues tended to be fairly confusing, but the character/relationship/offspring chart at the end was welcome, and critical for understanding what was going on.

All in all, an enjoyable read.

Can you make a list if who's the parents of whose kid?