this fanfic is awsome! i love all your original characters! Shujinkou is halirious. the story is well structured. i only have 2 problems: 1 Shunjinkou should have a male friend were things don't become awkward so easily. 2 please have more Kiyoko scenes. i know the last chapter was about kiyoko but it honestly didn't have that much kiyoko in it. and shujinkou sharing a room with her didn't result it much. i'm being a little biased because kiyoko is my favorite. anyway this story is awsome and i really look forward to the next chapter

this is a good fanfic

Damn good job with the rapid fire updates
Just don't overwork yourself though
Love your work and have a nice day or night and stay safe

please have more kiyoko scenes

I fully expected that Sayori and Shujinkou were going to kiss one way or another, but we got a POV chapter instead! Nice. Still surprised she didn’t get one though.

But with this chapter, I have a huge feeling it served to set up flags for Sayori and Shujinkou’s future relationship... *sigh* I’m not going to give up though. I’m still rooting for Monika to be endgame and be in a relationship with our protagonist!

Speaking of Monika, we have yet to see a POV chapter with her! Still very curious who this Claudette person is since she cut off Monika’s date fairly short to require her assistance.

(Maybe next time Monika could go for his lips instead of the cheeks on their next little date...)

But the best chapter from this small arc has to be Natsuki’s hands down. The way she acted was very in character and I loved how she burst out in emotion. Plus, who knew Shujinkou was a smooth talker when he said “Any guy would jump at the chance to hug such a cute girl”? Maybe he did get a few things from his father.

Anyways, I’m always looking forward to the next chapter as usual. Cheers!

I fully expected that Sayori and Shujinkou were going to kiss one way or another, but we got a POV chapter instead! Nice. Still surprised she didn’t get one though.

But with this chapter, I have a huge feeling it served to set up flags for Sayori’s and Shujinkou’s future relationship... *sigh* I’m not going to give up though. I’m still rooting for Monika to be endgame and be in a relationship with our protagonist!

Speaking of Monika, we have yet too see a POV chapter with her! Still very curious who this Claudette person is since she cut off Monika’s date fairly short to require her assistance.

(Maybe next time Monika could go for his lips instead of the cheeks on their next little date...)

But the best chapter from this small arc has to be Natsuki’s hands down. The way she acted was very in character and I loved how she out bursted in emotion when talking with him. Really shows how far their relationship has come. Plus, who knew Shujinkou was a smooth talker when he said “Any guy would jump at the chance to hug such a cute girl”? Maybe he did get a thing or two from his father.

Anyways, I’m always looking forward to the next chapter as usual. Cheers!

Yup things are about to get so much more complicated for our protagonist.

Oh how scandalous our boy is setting up a little harem for himself.

Hands down the spiciest chapter in this story.

Anyways, I knew the girls were going to be upset that their mutual crush almost kissed Mali for the sake of the club. Though this chapter was really good, I did kinda want to see a perspective chapter between all four girls when that whole thing was happening. Especially from Monika and Sayori since we never got one from them yet. Natsuki would’ve been interesting as well since she’s all tsundere, so it would be funny to read her thoughts about her feelings.

Honestly didn’t expect Yuri to go that far with the kiss though... nothing wrong with that of course, but I have a request to make Monika’s chapter even spicer hehe.

Now let’s see if Yuki is going to find out if they kiss and if Yuri is going to explain what she did fully...

Anyways, I enjoyed the chapter as usual. Excited for the next one!

Now this is exactly what I wanted to see from Mali; her teasing Shujinkou while annoying the other girls! This was a real treat. I can only imagine the Doki’s faces as they watch their mutual crush’s lips (almost) pressing onto another the jealous atmosphere.

I feel like if Mali was willing to go through with the kiss, one of the girls would probably tried to stop them (or all four), and then Mali would’ve placed her target on said person to tease.

Though I am quite sad you didn’t add their reactions to it in the end. I know they probably feel relieved that it didn’t happen, but I think they might feel hurt that their crush was willing to do THAT for the benefit of the club. Heck even Shujinkou felt it was wrong.

I kinda want to read another perspective chapter retelling this event in one of the girls mind. Maybe Monika writing it down in a journal? Or Yuri venting to Yuki? Or Natsuki’s and Sayori’s thoughts about it as a whole.

Speaking of the club... I hope Nese doesn’t try too take back the room or join the literature club to be honest.

If he does join, he’s probably going to join just for the girls and it would be up to Monika to protect her club as said in the last chapter. (Also I don’t want him to get in between Shujinkou and Monika or any of the other girls hehe)

Looking forward towards the next chapter as usual! Cheers.

And so, Shujinkou’s harem grew by one that day.

I really like Mali; a kouhai teasing her senpai is such a good trope. Though I am a bit curious about her backstory just a bit.

With her saying “I wouldn’t want to do anything to jeopardize spending more time with Senpai”, I’m pretty sure she’s going to join the club soon. Hopefully. Her teasing the girls about their feelings about Shujinkou would be a fun read.

Though I am pretty sure she snuck away from the group, I’m surprised no one noticed she was gone as she waited for Shujinkou out the bathroom. But I really wanted to read the girls reactions about seeing Mali pressing her breasts against him, or at least wrapping her arm on his as they walked back down. Now that would of been a real treat.

Mali messing with Shujinkou and the girls was such a good scene. But I think she’s pretty spot on regarding their feelings for him!

That last scene with Shujinkou almost revealing what he liked most about the club though, I’m surprise no one caught what he almost said.

Darn. Looks like I was off the mark. Currently praying for Shujinkou, I wonder how he’s going to deal with her, or if he’s just going to put up with it. Cheers!

Holy crap, you made my jaw drop from that reveal with Hiro!

I see that this arc is going to be about Shujinkou’s family and him wanting to reunite them. I’m not sure what’s going to happen in the end, but I’m wondering if the girls are going to involved in it somehow. The only outcomes I see happening is either him accepting it or him reverting back to his former self. Either way, he’s going to find it out soon.

Anyways just a few things, I’m 60% sure this Hiroko person is might possibly Shujinkou’s sibling living with Jomei. I have a feeling that Sayori was dreaming about her childhood memories in the beginning of the chapter when she saidko. Shi...i think you have a few typos in this chapter, you put “Shi” instead of “Shu”). I feel like a little sister as Hiroko would be fitting. Maybe the clingy type who hasn’t seen her older brother in a long time would be nice.

I don’t know if Jomei might be the type of be responsible enough to raise a kid, but hey it’s a possibility. Either that or I’m just WAYYY off the tracks. But to be honest, I’m just excited to see how this arc goes and who this Hiroko person is.

Also, the person pulling the pranks just might be Sayori. With the way she’s acting suspicious, she might just be the culprit. Though vandalizing the chairs and mixing chemicals might be a bit too much however and seem OOC. If it isn’t her, then that’s fine; it just makes this world’s universe even more lively.

But Kiyoko is definitely going to join the club soon... or not.

Anyways, thanks for the chapters again, I’ll be patiently waiting for the next one. Cheers and stay safe.

You know, ever since the introduction of the mysterious Yoki character you kept teasing, I’ve always had a theory that Yoki would be Rei. I could be completely wrong, but I just have a feeling; maybe Rei doesn’t want to speak because maybe she might be recognized by voice or something. Then again, Rei seems like a emotionless character.

Still wondering about Monika’s goal however, I’m sure it’s finishing the story she’s making but I’m sure it’s connected to Shujinkou. (Maybe a confession to which he accepts hehe)