God I hate Sheera. Please I beg you, anything to see Soran and Leon talk this out. Let that be the epilogue. This story cannot end happy but give him hope in the afterlife if anyone deserves it its him. Please.

OOOO
watch out blackstorm your end is NOT pleasant
i can't believe you actually updated? magical

well well well i was RIGHT
you killed goldenpaw right after you killed her hopes and dreams
i'm not surprised tbh because blackpaw is a mess
and owlpaw you HELPED
honestly i'm surprised blackpaw hasn't been kicked out of the Clan yet the way he carries on

And there he goes, stumbling right off that cliff into the darkness, I loathe Sheera so much, Soran, no baby please.

ooooo yes slay goldenpaw bring her DOWN
gorsewhisker is an absolute dick and so is his mother
but yaaaay cyrith

HUNTER! THIS HURTS ME IN FIVE DIFFERENT WAYS!

1) that Blackpaw is feared by all his Clanmates
2) How much Snowstep's family loves him
3) THAT HIS APPRENTICE IS GOING TO BE SNOWSTEP'S NIECE OR NEPHEW
4) How much he's already drawn to Leon, to the point Sheera would use that against him
5) That despite how long Sheera's known Leon she can't replicate him correctly, or at least enough that someone who's only seen a glimpse of him can't tell there's something wrong

'hero'
sure sure Soran

noooooo Snowstep was my fave
how could you do this
HE WAS GOING TO HAVE A LIFE

n'aww baby Soran
i can't even remember how he got hanged, is that bad

10/10 chapter I love it, it's amazing I'm going to kill Sheera with my bare hands.

NO! NOT SNOWSTEP I LOVED HIM. Also Sheera is terrible I would like her to leave, there's no reason to guilt him for this, he panicked, that's not his fault. And LET HIM MAKE FRIENDS DON'T YOU HAVE HOBBIES SHEERA?

SHEERA YOU MONSTER I SEE YOU LEAVE THE SWEET BABY SOREN ALONE. I love him, and his parents how dare you.