Reviews for Condemned
Guest chapter 21 . 6/21
I cried at some point in there because oml
And the way the fic ended with Jack was all like how did I not recognize him? And then that last "Maybe he just didn't want to see Danny"
It just feels fitting for the end of the fic. And I dunno why but like I had a moment of semi-epiphany that this is the end of the fic for like 0.2 seconds and I had emotions about that
Gosh I really liked getting the whole thing from Jack's POV and just the chapter and story in general were a great read :3
Thanks a lot!
I hope you're doing well and, well, best of wishes with whatever's going on in your life.
PyxisNoir chapter 21 . 6/18
Good lord that was hard to read. It was beautifully written with so much depth and emotion. I just spent the last two hours reading it... but man it was hard. I struggle with concerns about my step dad liking me, so this really hit home in a weird weird way for me. But I couldn’t stop reading. I’d love a mini sequel! I’m emotionally drained from reading this. Good job I really enjoyed it.
Purest of the Hearts chapter 20 . 6/11
"I thought it was what you wanted."
I have tears rolling down my cheeks. I love (aka love) that you ended this without a "and everything is gonna get better!" because it's not. You don't bounce back from that.
Purest of the Hearts chapter 18 . 6/11
Oh and there he goes! Oh dear.
Purest of the Hearts chapter 16 . 6/11
Sam is such a good friend purely for not giving in and giving him more of that drug despite him trying so hard.
Purest of the Hearts chapter 15 . 6/11
Ok not gonna lie this chapter got me tearing up at the end and I don't know why?
Purest of the Hearts chapter 12 . 6/10
Danny that's how you accidentally overdose buddy...
Purest of the Hearts chapter 8 . 6/10
I love (aka hate) how Jack is determined to believe that oh it's Phantom's fault. Oh it's Danny's fault. No, it's your Could-Do-No-Wrong wife's fault for looking at some [ghost] kid that's not even 18 yet despite being married for how many years now? Like bud, take off your narrow-sighted Hate Glasses and take a good look around. Poor Danny. He does not deserve this.
no1ghoul chapter 21 . 4/19
Loved this version of the story as well! Thanks for posting 3
Jeff chapter 21 . 4/18
Holy shit...
...I love you.
I mean your writing—holy fuck.
It’s so GOOD askdskdjddksjsjdkd
Just...WOW. Holy shit. I feel like my heart has shattered into a million pieces on the floor. Did I ever tell you that you write the angstiest FanFiction I’ve ever read?
It fuckin pains me that I can’t accurately describe how talented you are.
This was a fantastic character study. With a fantastic plot and fantastic characters and fantastic portrayals of abuse and—fantastic EVERYTHING.
Thank you.
Guest chapter 21 . 4/18
Oh wow.. I recently decided to check this story again to see if it updated as I had been keeping track of it since it came out and my god this story is amazingly depressing. I thought Disparaged was intense, I teared up in that one for sure, but this one.. This one made me straight up cry, not many fics have that affect on me, this one was somehow just so much sadder and depressing, and did hit a bit close to home at times. Honestly this was such an amazing read I absolutely love your writing, you have such good characterization, you have an amazing way of drawing readers in completely, and it's so easy to visualize what's going on, I just love when I can fully immerse myself in reading. Seriously you did such a superb job thank you so much for sharing your stories, I'm wishing you well please take care and keep your spirits up, you're doing great. :)

-Murth
Pheek chapter 21 . 4/18
Oh this hurts. This hurts so badly. Damn...the family's broken. Shit
Great fic- I really enjoyed reading this
Ultimatrix bearer chapter 21 . 4/17
Talk about a downer ending.

KEEP BEING AWESOME!
Guest chapter 21 . 4/17
Man Spectra would have a freaking Spa day if she was there to see that.
Dp-Marvel94 chapter 21 . 4/17
Seeing the reveal and ending from Jack's pov was chilling and heartbreaking. This thoughts about Phantom are just brutal and sickening. And it's really disheartening that the reveal really didn't solve that many problems, especially between Danny and his dad's relationship. I would love to see that bonus follow up so I really hope you are able to write it.
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