Reviews for Heart Of An Immortal |
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Guest chapter 4 . 2/21 Sigue con la historia por favor |
KaiShinLover chapter 4 . 6/29/2019 Omg...it is so goooooodddd ! Why dont you continue this story ? I love it |
Sithis chapter 4 . 3/28/2019 Hey! I’m glad that you are continuing with this story! For me, I always thought of Kaito’s wings being clipped as a metaphor for him loosing his sense of morality. The persona of Kid represents joy and hope, along with good morals. But if he isn’t careful than he can easily become a “crow” and kill someone. And his wings being coated in blood basically means that he has killed and is similar to the saying “to have blood on your hands”. The clipping of his wings could be seen as a loss of innocence as he crosses a moral line and can never soar high in the sky (like taking the high ground) like the dove that he once was. Idk, that’s just my view. I hope it helps! I really hope that Conan can prevent him from becoming a crow. I can wait to read your next chapter! :) |
Stefunee Pylant chapter 1 . 3/28/2019 crud,I messed up and don't know how to fix it from my last post,so this was to fix some of the errors in ,I can't post 2 reviews for one chapter,so I had to put this in a different chapter is what I meant to say: I had to re-read it to be able to give an accurate view on it,and maybe that line meant something to do with his free will it took so long to post this,I didn't notice that it had updated until it had already been up for over an hour. |
Stefunee Pylant chapter 4 . 3/28/2019 I had to re-read it to be able to give an accurate view on it,and maybe that line meant something to do with his free will slipping,or it took so long to post this,I didn't notice that it had updated until it had already been up for over an hour. |
Stefunee Pylant chapter 3 . 3/18/2019 can you please continue this? It's really good so far,and it would be sad if this was as far as it went |
Neyane chapter 3 . 2/21/2018 I thought I had followed your fic, but maybe the alert emails aren't quite working yet. Still sounds interesting anyway |
TumblrAnon chapter 2 . 2/7/2018 This is a wonderful idea! I hope you can continue this! :) |
Neyane chapter 2 . 2/2/2018 Wow, okay, why not. Could be interesting |
Smiley-Nami chapter 1 . 1/28/2018 This is interesting. Continue when you can. |