Reviews for Making Up For Missed Birthday's
Luckenzio chapter 5 . 5/6
Damn ... its going to be an awkward reunion when they go back to Vale.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/7/2019
Are you going to update or not? Let's see Yang and Raven punish RWB and Cinder.
Guest chapter 3 . 3/6/2019
Are we going to see Yang make her team "pay" for leaving? Her and Raven double teaming them could be hot. Maby have them double team Weiss at the camp, triple team Ruby sometime before the battle at Haven and all of them gangbang the "pussy", aka Blake, after. Maby Saphron and Terra would like some action. Oh! They could make Cinder and Emerald their presonal Bitches!
Luckenzio chapter 3 . 3/6/2019
Yang x Raven is love. Yang x Raven is life.
FloridaMan722 chapter 3 . 3/2/2019
Good chapter
As for your questions, I have a couple hot combos/options

1. Make it a chapter of helping Blake with her mother. As for who's the futa, her mother should be (just to shake things up). however, it's Kali who's domming Blake.
2. Similar to above, but this time, Blake and Kali are Yang's side bitches as well.
3. Make it it's own story, but Kali is punishing/training a futa Blake after catching her jacking off to her.
4. Make it it's own story, but futa Kali is trying to surpress her urges toward Blake, but Blake finds out and helps her control them (or something)
KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 2 . 1/25/2019
The biggest problem with your Dom Yang stories is that they are so unlike Yang it is hard to read, finally found out the problem with your Dom Yang stories. Yang would be more on the tender side of the Dom side than what you write. Your Dom Yang is more like what Raven would be as a Dom. Yang would be more like what White Rose Trash writes with her Ruby and Weiss stories.

Well least I now know why I am not a fan of your Dom Yang stories just doesn't suit her character. You should try writing Dom Yang more loving and caring as that is what her character is about. Only real way to make her the dominant and not make it read weirdly.

Still not really a fan of your Sub Raven her actions make far more sense with Volume six now as well. Curious as to what you actually think about that and her as a character now.
Necrotic Knight chapter 2 . 12/2/2018
I eagerly await the next chapter,if there is one
Tiffanyiscool chapter 2 . 11/17/2018
Oh, Raven didn't need the mouthpiece this time: someone's getting broken. This story is something I didn't know I wanted but now I can't wait to see where it goes! Glad that there's gonna be plot though instead of just pure smut. I am wondering how the whole 'Weiss being kidnapped by the Tribe' is going to play out or if Yang will take over as leader? There are a lot of possibilities and I'm hyped AF to see where you'll take it. I also want to know whether you have plans to do more Dom Yang stories similar to this?
Yubella chapter 1 . 5/16/2018
probably what would have made it more intresting is if it were more of a sex fight than Yang outsmarting her mother.
The Stray Wanderer chapter 1 . 3/19/2018
Can you make more please.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/7/2018
Loving this one. Hope you write more about Raven and her new Mistress ;)
CrimsonMan50 chapter 1 . 1/30/2018
Crocea Norse?
Guest chapter 1 . 1/28/2018
Nora's Arc is the best name in my opinion
TheKingOfTheMotorMouth's chapter 1 . 1/28/2018
second chapter?
MizoreShirayukiFan chapter 1 . 1/27/2018
Lightning Blade for Jaune/Nora I suppose.