I have to say, for a first fanfic, you've done fairly well. You've held a plotline that builds up the main character, you very rarely had a mistake. The slow pace feels right with how it's going so far. Anyways, have a great day.

When you last long enough to see yourself become the villain - in reference to you saying you didn't want to be one of those unfinished stories, and yet... Here we are.

I keep reading stories (because for some reason Harry x Avatar is my new obsession) where Harry meets Eywa and gets a new body, and in almost every single one she . . anything. Like, wtf. Harry never asks questions too! Like WTF! Harry's like, 'apparently I'm on a different planet without a body and the f****** planet is going to give me one... Okay'. Like,,,what?! No 'are there other people here' 'what are they called' 'can they understand English' 'what's my cover story', nothing! And she just throws him into it! 'Hey, I'm basically a cosmic entity who creates people and seeing you've had a hard life want to give you a new one.' Valid. Okay. 'BUT instead of telling you anything I'm going to say "it's okay, go to sleep" and just let you figure out an entirely new place by yourself. Hope you speak the language. Also, watch out for the angry cat thing. And the not-elephants. And the big angry not-dragon.' It's... it's so frustrating. It makes me want to stop reading. Because for the rest of the story he's going to be bumbling around and f*** up any meeting he has with the natives. So much for, 'I totally live here'. Like, I don't want her to download all the information in his brain 'here's everything you need to know' style, but something! Honestly. I love the story, and it's interesting since it seems to be after-cannon but this just... it's so... ugh. Frustrating.

I like it s2

continue, please

I would love for Harry to chew out the last shadow about going after him. I had the mental image of Harry spitting like a angry cat right now, pfft!

Please update soon i love it

Continue and update Harry by magic prevent war .humans who je sent on earth Bright with them magic created disease transform human into na'vi .All humans who dont die in conflicts rised from transformation change to new Stilo techology and modernization community but restore Nature wildlife and after is builded portal to short way to Pandora and back is they culture changed to more na' who stay is transformed into full na'vi and from items from hell gate as new Clan create they new home with technology Safe for more.

I feel like taking away Harry's magic is like replacing Harry with an OC who has Harry's memories, like all the knowledge of magic that Harry gained at Hogwarts is now completely useless.
I'm honestly not to fond of that . . .
:-/

love it! can't wait to see what happens next! hope you update soon!

I'm curious about what Eywa wants Harry to do. Does she just want him 'to be'?

LFTM

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cool story I hope you don't end it anytime soon.

At last, this is done.

Good chapter.

Thanks for the chapter.