DPSS
Author writes nonsensical smut
gets criticized for not following Shirou's lore abilities
God i love this fandom
now excuse me while i do the same, in the fate route shirou could hit f*cking berserker with a makeshift bow and arrow after not practicing for more than a year without any reinforcement, his archery is also his basis for his meditation for his magecraft

well besides that yay! a fanfic with Ayako not much of those, though surprised that she has more experience since she said in the vn the she doesn't have any experience and is in competition with Rin on who can get into a relationship first, though Rin was worse cause she even did a suspension bridge event to actually get any feeling to someone who confessed to her as in both of them standing at the edge of the school rooftop. Though both are pining on Shirou as who they want *Hint hint* as well as with Sakura *nudge nudge* Threesome? Foursome anyone?
Or maybe a fate/hollow ataraxia one with Caren Ortensia aka Kirei's daughter who is a nun, who Shirou had sex with inside a church, or with Sella and Leysritt the two Einzbern meidos who also has an interest on Shirou *blatant winking because we do not have enough of those characters in any fic*
pls post more

I really quite liked this. Ayako is one of the more underrated fate characters. If you need to see more of her I would recommend atraxia.

Were you the original author of this, cause I swear, its exactly the same as that One Shot H I encountered before.

Genial historia nunca había visto un igual espero con ansias por el próximo capitulo.
Espero que tu historia este situada antes de la guerra del grial así shirou/masamune/akazuma/Salomón tendría tiempo de hacer primero su harén humano Pls incluye a Luvia , Bazzet y Caren.
Para las servant's creo que podrías cambiar algunos de ellos como Heracles , Cu , Emiya y Sasaki por Pentecilia/berserker, Scathash/assessin, Musashi/saber y Tomoe-Gozen/archer .
*Shirou : Artoria/lancer
*Rin : Musashi/saber
*Sakura : Medusa/rider
*Luvia : Medea/caster
*Illyaviel : Pentecilea/berserker
*Bazzet : Scathash/assessin
*Ayako : Tomoe-Gozen/archer
*Caren : femGhilgamesh
* Jeanne-D'Arc/ruler
Kirei debería de estar muerto en tu historia y Caren sería la mediadora .
Bueno esa es sólo mí opinión personal espero que no te aya molestado .

Nope, sorry, can't accept it. The premise is completely unrealistic. Shirou doesn't miss, not with the bow. And especially not with with a stationary target. Shirou has a pratically inate mastery of the bow. In camon, he only ever missed a shot onvlce and even then he claimed it would missed (which basically means to me that he missed on purpose). I'm sorry, but I'm of those guys. That faulty piece of lore basically ruined this for me.

Damn I was really hoping archer would walk in.