Loving the book so far but you left a few she/her pronouns when you were referring to Luke. Also, there’s a mention of Annabeth in Luke’s place. Kinda takes the reader out of it lol. But that’s just a very minor complaint, everything else is awesome!

" we'd just released a zebra in Las Vegas. at least he wouldn't stand out."
I laughed so hard at this line. I love deadpan quips

Lol you forgot to change a lot of things in this chapter. While I do know some men call other guys 'honey', I'm pretty sure Luke would've reacted a LOT differently to that. And I'm pretty sure Annabeth isn't on the quest. Still a good story though!

I’m surprised this story isn’t more popular. I’m looking forward to the sequel!

Wow, you really don't like Annabeth, do you? I was actually really interested by the premise of this fic, but I can't stomach this blatant character bashing. Good writing beats interesting premise any day.

Can we skip the Sea of Monsters? Aside from the ending it's probably the most boring of Rick's books in my opinion...

another update yay!

Easily one of my favorite femPercy fanfics! This was so amazing I loved it! Do you plan on going straight into the 2nd book or exploring the year round life a bit?

Wow! This had a really great start and a great ending!

Thank-you for updating this wonderful piece of literature.

The ending of this chapter gave me a sense a peace. Good job!

Good on her ;)

Wow! That was action packed! I'm excited for the next chapter!

What relationships are you planning?