This version of Harry doesn't deserve a second chance. I don't feel like with his personality he'd ever be happy.

Okay. I can’t with this story. Peter was killed by his dark mark at the trial and now he’s escaped Azkaban. I can’t even with this. I’m sorry. My brain can’t even follow the plot.

Well, so far this story (especially this chapter) feels like a bunch of randomness got thrown into a bowl, then mixed up and thrown out, and this is the result. I’m going to keep reading to see if I can make sense of the rest of it. I recall reading some of your other stories a few years ago and I remember enjoying them, so I don’t know if this story is just different or if maybe my tastes have changed a little bit...

okay it's 4:14 a.m. when I'm writing this to you so I'm about to go to bed but I couldn't get off my head so I have to ask is Harry's power level due to him already then an adult prior to going back in time or is there something else going on and please tell me if it would be a spoiler to tell me that it comes out later on what's going on but I am absolutely loving your story

I could not go on with this story before writing a review for this chapter I loved the ending it was beautifully done absolutely amazing

I have to admit chapter one I was actually wondering if it this was going to be a good story but I'm actually enjoying it intensely you are a wonderful author and I know in another store you said you weren't going to be doing any more writing on fanfiction but let me encourage you to do some more you're wonderful at it oh by the way have you written any books that are all your own if so and you've had them published I wouldn't mind knowing the titles cuz I definitely buy them your fanfics are amazing I shudder to imagine the joy of reading truly all your own personal work it will be a pleasure to read and I look forward to it

"This is all your fault because you didn't pursue a girl who wanted nothing to do with you and you didn't meddle with your friends marriage. You blame other people for their own actions that had nothing to do with you, when you should have been sticking your nose where it didn't belong. You let other people make decisions for themselves and live with the consequences, when you should have been making their decisions for them. Because you haven't properly controlled the lives of those around you, we're going to rewrite you to become the person we want you to be - we're going to kill you and replace you."

This has to be the dumbest premise for a fanfic I've ever read.

Good thing you didn’t leave us with a cliffie. I would not have minded but some would have been mad at you!

Enjoyed the reconstruction of Harry’s life

Nomags works. I like the combined force. Do the nomags know about magic? I would think that they do.

I was wondering what you were going to do for the rest of the story

When I saw the pet name given to Hermione. I thought she was going to start taking bets and wanted a piece of the action!

Don’t know if I read this before. I thought that I had read all your work.

Harry is not responsible for what happened in Ron and Hermione's marriage. That responsibility lies solely with them. They are adults and responsible for their own relationships. While Harry could have stepped in, so could many others.

This is easily one of the best fanfiction I have ever read on this site. Thank you for your effort and time