Nice idea to put yourself in the town; haven't thought of that :)
As for the fic itself, here's my opinion: It's kind of hard to read since you don't use any form of punctuation. It makes the story difficult, since you have to back up and re-read what you just read to make sense. Jack and DJ seemed in character but I'd like more description of things. The thug thing happened kind of fast, just like that, and then it was over. A bit more description of the action would be nice.
All and all, it's a nice story and I'm intrigued :)

Great start to the story. A small criticism: it's easier to read if you use correct punctuation. Especially in the action parts, you tend to run one long sentence. Smaller sentences are easier to read.
As for the story itself:
DJ seems to be his cheery self. Interesting to see what will happen with auntie Chris. And the thug. That seemed a bit out of the blue, but I guess we'll learn more about that in the next parts?